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3/4/21, 10:03 PM
Yes great chapter - i like how he is going to use his dad to keep his brothers in line
Elm
3/4/21, 8:49 PM
Another great one!
Rubberdrone
3/4/21, 8:36 PM
Oooo, I can't wait for the next chapter...... This is so hot. Thanks for this great story.
Jack
3/4/21, 8:35 PM
Great, now I've got to get through the rest of work without throwing a boner. Quality work, as always, Author. Like, not just the subject matter, but your grammar, spelling, and punctuation are improving the more you write. Well done. You said in your note that we should tell you if we want to see more. I'm running out of ways to say it! Please keep writing, please keep writing, please keep writing. I am so, so excited for the next few chapters. I still check several times a day to see if you've updated anything, so please don't keep us waiting too long!
3/4/21, 1:51 PM
I'm really enjoying this series! Thank you for continuing to write it.
3/3/21, 7:58 PM
I like what you have written so far, so keep on doing what you are doing! Incest is wincest. Thanks again for the great story!
3/3/21, 2:31 AM
the older brother likes being a cop. make him a police dog pup that gaurds the family.
3/3/21, 1:54 AM
I'd love for the brothers to retain all of their morals. Reluctant pleasure and all that. Make them desire Vincent AND feel guilty and disgusted by themselves, just like Emit was in the shower scene.
3/2/21, 10:31 PM
Having Emit's army buddies and Erik's patrol partner to the mix would be fun. Doesn't need a detailed explaination on how they've been reprogrammed; just paragraph outlining would be fine for side characters.
Lakritz24
3/2/21, 8:21 PM
It sounds like I have inspiried it in my youth.