Recent Comments

3/19/21, 11:12 PM
Great idea with the Aware mode. And very hotly told. This chapter made me like Erik. But watching him be aware of what he is to become was a great punishment that I enjoyed seeing. Actually, the only punishment I can see is for him to always be in the Aware mode or else he's enjoying it. So it is interesting how this will play out. I look forward to the next one (kind of bummed out I caught up and have to wait now)
3/17/21, 9:25 AM
As usual an amazing chapter, looks like this is proper revenge, but seems like Erik hits our protagonist’s nerves the hardest, I wonder if Eli’s punishment will be more relaxed than Erik’s
3/17/21, 2:19 AM
I've been waiting for a story like this for ages! If you didn't plan it from the start I'd like to nominate Sam and Mac for enslavement as well
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3/15/21, 6:11 PM
Welcome back! I'm glad the pharaoh reestablished his presence! Looking forward to the next parts
3/14/21, 6:42 AM
Please keep going. There must be so much more that can be told. The Father and his friends, The Father and The Brothers and there has to be an obscure cousin somewhere, LOL!
3/12/21, 11:54 AM
Really looking forward to him getting his brother's. THe father's transformation has been awesome!
3/12/21, 12:20 AM
Two words : Fucking Amazing. Thanks! And, I am only half through.
3/11/21, 5:38 PM
Hope you do more soon
3/11/21, 5:08 PM
Erik being confused on his changes is more fun to read than him being *Aware*, but I'll take whatever you'll give us :p