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3/22/21, 1:25 AM
Re-reading this story now that I've read the preceding ones, it's even better! The hypno-draining protocol, paradoxically, has **filled** me -- namely, with more wank material than I've read or watched in ages!
3/22/21, 1:18 AM
Another phenomenal chapter. The way the slave's real-time action gets invaded by Machine directives is incredibly arousing. The slave seems barely able to distinguish Machine "hyperreality" from his/its real-time life. You're entering the realm of truly scary-hot! (That's a compliment!)
3/22/21, 1:07 AM
The notion of an implanted fixation -- here, the oral fixation -- is incredibly hot. I'm totally drawn into the mental process that you describe -- the process of the subject's mind being "fucked open," as you express it. Reading your prose is like sliding into trance.
3/22/21, 12:55 AM
The situation that you describe is incredibly hot. And the words you use to describe it are themselves hypnotic. Your Machine is definitely having its desired effect on ME!
3/22/21, 12:08 AM
This is absolutely awesome! It is the first of this series that I've read. My priority is to read the others. Immediately.
3/21/21, 8:02 AM
another great chapter, even though id like to see more, understand that you need break from this. What i liked was that Vince has given his big brother a liking for leather, be good to see his cop uniform being turned into a leather cop uniform
3/21/21, 1:15 AM
Really hot. I'm liking the way its going so far as it seems realistic for the motivations. Only thing I would really like was of it expands outside if the family to include more cops. Would be great if Erik offered up his partner to take his place. Seems like the kinda scumbag move he would make or it could be part of breaking him down since his thing is the uniform. Cant imagine his partner would be a great guy if he sticks with Erik.
Jack
3/20/21, 7:19 PM
Fuck, this was hot. I'm so not into foot stuff, but I genuinely came while I was reading the interaction between Vincent and Erik. You're so good that you're making me like stuff I don't like! And the moment where Erik admitted that he regretted nothing, and so neither would Vincent? God, it was amazing. Quality writing once again. I mentioned this before, but it's so cathartic to read as these bastards get what's coming to them. There's so much more that can happen, and I'm genuinely excited to see where it goes. I'm sorry about life being shitty. It happens, but it's never fun. There isn't much I can do, other than compliment you and say that your writing ability continues to improve with every chapter. I'm happy to help you proofread the stories, if you would like. Let me know.
3/20/21, 3:36 PM
Take all the time you need. We don't want writer burnout. For Eli, might I suggest not dumbing him down? Maybe he's the one who partially brake away from his reprogramming.
3/20/21, 3:35 PM
Superb isn't the right word, "fanfreakingtastic" is much much better! You are truly talented and I'm grateful I get to enjoy the fruits of your creative labor. Mars does seem like a good idea sometimes doesn't it? Hopefully the writing process is both cathartic and enjoyable for you so sending good vibes your way. This IS my favorite story on here!