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3/24/21, 12:06 PM
Hilarious
3/24/21, 7:01 AM
Has this been published somewhere else? Very hot, but I feel like I've read it before.
3/24/21, 12:43 AM
What a sweet lovely guy! ;-)
3/23/21, 3:51 AM
The picture you paint of Dixon's obedience-soaked inner mind is incredibly hot! As for the circle-jerk, it would have been hot even with non-tranced dudes. Knowing that the dudes in THIS circle were STAMPED with obedience, however, made it way, way hotter!
3/23/21, 12:26 AM
Now that all the pieces are in the chessboard, things will be moving pretty fast.
Conversion Enthusiast
3/22/21, 10:08 PM
Hot! I think I'd have preferred a bit of a slower pacing but I don't want to interrupt your writing style either! Dang I missed this haha. Glad to read as always
3/22/21, 1:45 AM
The prospect of the Machine transforming yet others into *its* slaves is a great way to conclude! And you definitely planted the seed of that idea earlier, which is deft story-telling! Thank you very much for having written this amazing series.
3/22/21, 1:38 AM
RoboticXperiment03 makes a great point! Your writing is so clear and so calm, and that makes your words the perfect tool to arouse the reader -- perfect stimuli, and no distraction. The action in this chapter is hyper-hot. Machine control and turning a guy into a mechanized slave are major turn-ons for me, but they don't work for me if they are overly specific or heavy-handed. The details that you describe, you describe at the exact right pitch!
3/22/21, 1:25 AM
Re-reading this story now that I've read the preceding ones, it's even better! The hypno-draining protocol, paradoxically, has **filled** me -- namely, with more wank material than I've read or watched in ages!