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3/24/21, 1:31 PM
This is ADORABLE! You describe Jon so perfectly--God, he sounds like an ideal guy--and his sweet, genuine, wonderful personality makes him even better. The fact that he's been tricked into giving oral sex for so long is kind of hilarious (although it's sad that people have been taking advantage of his naivete for so long...). I hope that Theo can teach Jon a few "facts of life" and make him more worldly, without Jon losing his pure heart. :D
3/24/21, 12:06 PM
Hilarious
3/24/21, 7:01 AM
Has this been published somewhere else? Very hot, but I feel like I've read it before.
3/24/21, 12:43 AM
What a sweet lovely guy! ;-)
3/23/21, 3:51 AM
The picture you paint of Dixon's obedience-soaked inner mind is incredibly hot! As for the circle-jerk, it would have been hot even with non-tranced dudes. Knowing that the dudes in THIS circle were STAMPED with obedience, however, made it way, way hotter!
3/23/21, 12:26 AM
Now that all the pieces are in the chessboard, things will be moving pretty fast.
Conversion Enthusiast
3/22/21, 10:08 PM
Hot! I think I'd have preferred a bit of a slower pacing but I don't want to interrupt your writing style either! Dang I missed this haha. Glad to read as always
3/22/21, 1:45 AM
The prospect of the Machine transforming yet others into *its* slaves is a great way to conclude! And you definitely planted the seed of that idea earlier, which is deft story-telling! Thank you very much for having written this amazing series.
3/22/21, 1:38 AM
RoboticXperiment03 makes a great point! Your writing is so clear and so calm, and that makes your words the perfect tool to arouse the reader -- perfect stimuli, and no distraction. The action in this chapter is hyper-hot. Machine control and turning a guy into a mechanized slave are major turn-ons for me, but they don't work for me if they are overly specific or heavy-handed. The details that you describe, you describe at the exact right pitch!