Recent Comments

9/23/21, 1:02 AM
hot. can't wait for more.

9/23/21, 1:06 PM
@Jonanator thank you! we look forward to writing more!
9/22/21, 11:48 PM
This story shows great promise with extremely likeable characters and the start of some interesting plot lines. Looking forward to where you take the story next!
9/22/21, 11:31 PM
Ooo. I can't wait for more. Hope a part two is coming.
Sexcrab
9/22/21, 11:11 PM
The hook for the next one is great and all, but the highlight was finally seeing that Arthur used like the sexy daddy bear he is. I looked forward to this about 10 chapters ago and I wasn't disappointed. I really want to see Arthur used as a whore, preferably by Milo.
Anonymous
9/22/21, 10:33 PM
can't wait for the next chapter
9/20/21, 2:45 AM
hate to see Milo leave so soon. but im really loving this series.
9/19/21, 6:03 PM
At least we could see Dad lose his virginity <3
9/14/21, 11:38 PM
i wonder what the possible effects of eli having heard Erik's trigger phrase might be? sure he has only heard it once, and he has no idea what it could do, but what kinds of trouble could a smart, vindictive, jealous, middle sibling do with his elder brother's trigger before Vince finds out? just a thought.

Blackjinx123
9/18/21, 2:06 AM
@Mind Labyrinth, what a great thought that is! I'll say this definitely got the creative juices flowing ;)

9/18/21, 8:55 AM
@Blackjinx123 *Squealing and clapping* What a wonderful thing to hear that i inspired such a talented storyteller!
mcdermottr13@gmail.com
9/14/21, 5:31 AM
Never ceases to amaze me, your story is getting better and better. I find myself sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter. Please, please keep this story going.

Blackjinx123
9/18/21, 2:05 AM
@mcdermottr13@gmail.com, wow! What a compliment! And don't worry, I'm absolutely going to keep going. Writing this story has been so much fun and hearing how much people enjoy my writing is inspirational. I'm so happy you've enjoyed the story thus far!