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Jockmorphr
3/30/21, 12:57 AM
I really like the context of this story, and the fratboys themselves are shaping up to be really fun and interesting characters. I will admit to finding the action a little confusing given the number of charactes, the multiple rules, and the timing element. That said, I like the pressure the guys are under to comply and I am really enjoying the mental and physical changes that you've woven in. I hope that the guys will be presented with other humbling and humiliating mental and physical changes as we move through the story. Seeing these hunky, well built and well hung jocks lose some of the attributes they hold so dear would be delicious. In particular, it would be very hot if the cock shrinking became cumulative (rather than resetting) resulting in some of the guys getting really small cocks out of the curse.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:59 PM
@Jockmorphr thanks for the feedback! so far I'm planning on nothing being permanent because i want them to feel like they're fighting against the humiliation the whole time, as in it's fun to humiliate them anew every week. if they had tiny dicks at the beginning of the week, well there's nothing to take away from there! i will keep my eye out for things that i would eventually like to make permanent but no plans for that now
3/30/21, 3:03 AM
Loving this story - any chance we can witness a double penetration of Trevor? That would be insanely hot. And some public humiliation of Greg.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:55 PM
@Haven both of those are definitely good ideas that I'll keep in mind!
3/30/21, 7:04 AM
The rules are a bit hard to keep track off if I'm going to be honest, however this was one fucking hot chapter! I can't wait to see what other tricks you have up your sleeves :) wouldn't have minded them chosing the Alpha option...

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:54 PM
@Transformheaven thanks for the feedback! yeah i know it's hard to keep track of. i knew that going into it, but i don't edit at all. my philosophy is to just write sexy stuff because that's what we're all here for and if i stressed out about the writing quality too much i would just never publish anything or it would become un-fun.
3/30/21, 11:05 AM
This was great! I often though about some mangas like King's game or Death's choice, with the people turning against each other and looking for themselves rather than focusing on everyone's survival. It's probably because I'm thinking of horror mangas that I am worried for the fate of those jocks... Definitively interested in how the alpha card would play (but how would this card receives unanimity before they all turned gay or something?)... Not much into humiliation, so I can't give ideas.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:51 PM
@BobbyBlobfish the cards are there to add discord so that you keep getting reminded how the boys are fighting against doing gay shit and what their priorities are for avoiding it, so yeah that's a very humiliation aspect of it. the only reason they'd pick one card is to avoid the others
3/30/21, 12:46 AM
That was excellent! I look forward to hearing the new rules for the upcoming week
Anonymous
3/29/21, 11:24 PM
Nothing like being a diapered frat boy while sucking dick. It's the best.
3/29/21, 7:16 PM
can't wait for more.
Tyrol
3/29/21, 6:22 PM
Thanks guys for letting me know about the Trevor/Travis issue. Yes it should all be Trevor. I have an edit queued. Thanks for all your feedback as well!
Underwearguy72
3/29/21, 12:39 PM
Great story so far. You are an excellent writer and this is a very interesting and compellling story. I can't wait to see what you have instore for them coming up. I do have one question, will any underwear or mention of underwear that these various frat boys are wearing come into play in the story? Just curious. I eagerly await the next chapter. Excellent job and writing.
3/29/21, 12:08 PM
Trevor was referred to as Travis a lot in this chapter, I guess that was unintended?