Recent Comments

3/30/21, 2:51 PM
Any chance for weight gain and/or mpreg? Youve mentioned baby a few times so i think an actual pregnancy/birth would be so erotic. Or even raceplay/amping up the interracial aspect of it? Focusing on Trevor or the asian twins servicing Zeke's big black cock or submitting to Trevor's big white cock would be hot as hell.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:49 PM
@Fattenupmen good chance for mpreg of some kind since I'm somewhat into that myself. weight gain maybe. i admit if i tried race play it wouldn't feel authentic though

4/1/21, 2:14 AM
@Tyrol im so excited
3/31/21, 11:19 PM
Hey, this is one of the best writers on here. This Is one of his best (My oppiion). . Eat it up guys, it's got everything.
3/31/21, 4:29 PM
so hot,can't wait to read the ones which follow
3/31/21, 8:57 AM
i appreciate how much thought you put into this and the rules and everything. very hot and excited for more! can't wait for the cards and for visitors to accidentally stay too long
Toughluck
3/31/21, 3:04 AM
I'll take much more of this any day!
3/31/21, 1:10 AM
I definitely hope one of them becomes the Alpha that they all want to be serviced by! Even for a week would be awesome. Coming back from those feelings would be harder to deal with. Now if only the Alpha becomes a massively muscled huge cocked guy and they all grow bubble butts!
3/31/21, 12:40 AM
this is an exceptional story! it might be interesting to have a card that grows cocks instead of shrinks them, to see how far some of the boys would debase themselves to become more "masculine"
Evan
3/30/21, 10:33 PM
A surprising amount of character growth in this chapter! Still really loving this concept. Nice going!
Anonymous
3/30/21, 4:53 PM
It is a frat house. So underwear, diapers, blowjobs, watersports, public and private, under cloths, etc, is a normal part of hazing.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 5:13 PM
not to be fair to frats because they really don't deserve it but not all of them are the same. also hazing is done specifically with the intent of psychological warfare, because the people involved don't want to do it, and is usually only applied to new members. so bottom line, just because it's a common theme doesn't mean it's something any frat brother would be
3/28/21, 8:31 PM
This is an interesting premise, and I"m excited as to where you're going with it. Though I have to confess, I find the idea of frat boys being magically cursed into having lots of gay sex to be LESS improbable than the mere existence of an American fraternity as racially diverse as this one. :)

Tyrol
3/30/21, 4:17 PM
@Evelded i know right? i simply refuse to write a porn with only white people in it though (when there are this many unrelated characters). it goes against my ethos.

3/30/21, 4:41 PM
@Tyrol Understood, although in my own writing, I have the opposite issue. As a white guy from the South, I'm uncomfortable writing porn focusing on other ethnicities for fear of sexualizing minorities. Especially so at a site like GSS where the focus is on mind control and is therefore inherently nonconsensual. Basically, I recoil at the idea of "enslaving" a POC even in a work of fiction. In the first draft of "Grand Theft Penis," the Mr. Wynne character was going to be a black guy explicitly using voodoo magic and then I decided that would be racist as hell. As much as possible, I try to simply avoid discussing the ethnicities of my characters so the reader can imagine whoever they want, but when it's something like "a fraternity of rich assholes," I suppose it's hard not to view them all as white dudes unless the text says differently. Not that it prevents me from enjoying your excellent story, of course. I look forward to seeing what the next week brings.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 5:09 PM
@Evelded https://youtu.be/RbhcRKsRwFM ever seen this? (freckle video) haha! in all seriousness though i don't like to give the reader the chance to imagine that all the characters are white because that's the default and i would prefer people tried to sexualize every race equally. and don't worry about the enslavement thing. everyone in this story gets their turn.