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4/1/21, 7:42 PM
As always hot as hell... Hope Vince turns Eli into a toilet slave as part of his humiliation
4/1/21, 3:55 PM
As per usual, really great job. You are really developing each of the characters very well and love the different perspectives in their own voices. Can't wait to read what happens to Eli
3/30/21, 2:51 PM
Any chance for weight gain and/or mpreg? Youve mentioned baby a few times so i think an actual pregnancy/birth would be so erotic. Or even raceplay/amping up the interracial aspect of it? Focusing on Trevor or the asian twins servicing Zeke's big black cock or submitting to Trevor's big white cock would be hot as hell.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:49 PM
@Fattenupmen good chance for mpreg of some kind since I'm somewhat into that myself. weight gain maybe. i admit if i tried race play it wouldn't feel authentic though

4/1/21, 2:14 AM
@Tyrol im so excited
3/31/21, 11:19 PM
Hey, this is one of the best writers on here. This Is one of his best (My oppiion). . Eat it up guys, it's got everything.
3/31/21, 4:29 PM
so hot,can't wait to read the ones which follow
3/31/21, 8:57 AM
i appreciate how much thought you put into this and the rules and everything. very hot and excited for more! can't wait for the cards and for visitors to accidentally stay too long
Toughluck
3/31/21, 3:04 AM
I'll take much more of this any day!
3/31/21, 1:10 AM
I definitely hope one of them becomes the Alpha that they all want to be serviced by! Even for a week would be awesome. Coming back from those feelings would be harder to deal with. Now if only the Alpha becomes a massively muscled huge cocked guy and they all grow bubble butts!
3/31/21, 12:40 AM
this is an exceptional story! it might be interesting to have a card that grows cocks instead of shrinks them, to see how far some of the boys would debase themselves to become more "masculine"
Evan
3/30/21, 10:33 PM
A surprising amount of character growth in this chapter! Still really loving this concept. Nice going!