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4/6/21, 7:13 AM
more chapters like this so hot!
4/5/21, 1:46 PM
Thank you for your comment. Yes, there's been a lot of plot to cover, but now that it's all explained, and the Pharaoh has returned more powerful than ever, we are back to the fun of the slow breaking of the will. Thank you for your suggestions too.
4/5/21, 1:38 PM
I'd stopped reading this series, just because the plot got a little too convoluted for me. But the description for this chapter caught my attention, and I'm glad I read it, because I was turned on by the President's relatively slow conversion and the way he was seduced by the promise to "Make Egypt Great Again" (so to speak). I hope that in subsequent chapters we get more detailed imagery of the men taking off their normal street clothes to don the Egyptian loincloths, because I think that's a really hot detail.
Martin
2/1/20, 9:58 AM
AbsMan420, thank you so much, coming from you that means a lot to me :) Firesix, see, how I'm blushing: ## 😊 Let's see what will happen to Steff and Alec. I actually can't wait to get my ideas on "paper" :) Thank you all for those encouraging comments!

4/5/21, 3:24 AM
@Martin hey still waiting for part 2 😅

Martin
4/5/21, 5:43 AM
@Pakibttm Thank you, that's nice to here that there are still people waiting for this. I'm horrible at finishing my stories, I know. This morning I had a *very* intense and hot half-sleep fantasy while wanking my morning wood. I think I have to get it written down asap to get it out of my system... It's not a continuation of this story, but if you liked it, you will probably like this short one-shot I'm planning to write today, too.
4/1/21, 7:42 PM
As always hot as hell... Hope Vince turns Eli into a toilet slave as part of his humiliation
4/1/21, 3:55 PM
As per usual, really great job. You are really developing each of the characters very well and love the different perspectives in their own voices. Can't wait to read what happens to Eli
3/30/21, 2:51 PM
Any chance for weight gain and/or mpreg? Youve mentioned baby a few times so i think an actual pregnancy/birth would be so erotic. Or even raceplay/amping up the interracial aspect of it? Focusing on Trevor or the asian twins servicing Zeke's big black cock or submitting to Trevor's big white cock would be hot as hell.

Tyrol
3/30/21, 3:49 PM
@Fattenupmen good chance for mpreg of some kind since I'm somewhat into that myself. weight gain maybe. i admit if i tried race play it wouldn't feel authentic though

4/1/21, 2:14 AM
@Tyrol im so excited
3/31/21, 11:19 PM
Hey, this is one of the best writers on here. This Is one of his best (My oppiion). . Eat it up guys, it's got everything.
3/31/21, 4:29 PM
so hot,can't wait to read the ones which follow
3/31/21, 8:57 AM
i appreciate how much thought you put into this and the rules and everything. very hot and excited for more! can't wait for the cards and for visitors to accidentally stay too long