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10/16/21, 5:26 PM
this is great, keep going please
10/16/21, 4:47 PM
This felt like filler. It may have been better to have skipped this chapter because it ultimately didn't add anything unfortunately and was a lot of text just to give a reason to be cruel again.
BRD
10/16/21, 4:22 PM
Fantastic story. Hoping for more in this tale!
10/15/21, 9:55 PM
Well Dennis turned out to be a total bastard! I simultaneously feel bad for Gary, and jealous of him. Considering the many dark fates that have befallen those who betray mind-controllers in the stories here, being turned into a leather pig isn't bad at all. Hopefully Gary will come to enjoy it more in time.
Bb73444
10/15/21, 5:26 PM
Beautifully written story and wonderfully erotic. Can't wait to read more!
10/15/21, 2:05 PM
A good start and I hope you continue. For that matter, I hope you come back to Goblin Says at some point, as it's one of my favorite stories on the site. cheers.
10/15/21, 11:02 AM
Very fun and sexy adventure! Feels unresolved, so I hope you decide to continue it.
10/15/21, 3:38 AM
Loved this chapter. This is one of my favorite stories. Hope more is coming.
Jack
10/15/21, 2:51 AM
Oh, god. What have I done? Quick, does anyone know a dick doctor?!? I've been masturbating to this story for so long that I think I may have done some serious damage. To be fair, it's not at all my fault, Author. These moments between Emit and Vince, not to mention the memory changes in Mac, are seriously dangerous. This series should come with a warning: "Reading or partaking of this story leads to a higher risk of semen depletion, chafing, begging for new chapters, looking at muscular relatives differently, incessant head canon, and an inability to tolerate shitty stories. Continue at your own pleasure."
10/14/21, 11:49 PM
@amul Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed! it was a fun series to write. Even better when I can make you think something is hot when your not actually into it 😏😉