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7/21/21, 3:57 AM
Such incredible world-building and an intriguing story! I look forward to more chapters.

7/21/21, 3:59 AM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much for your encouraging words! We're already editing the next few, so more is definitely coming!
IvorySilk
7/20/21, 11:34 PM
Hehe, it's starting! Looking forward to more! ^^

7/20/21, 11:42 PM
@IvorySilk thanks for reading it and encouraging me to keep at it! <3
7/19/21, 12:26 PM
where is the rest of this story? I've read this before and i know it went farther then them getting on the bus!

7/19/21, 11:18 PM
@Kerwin I've started rewriting it into the multi chapter story it should have been in the first place. The original upload had a lot cut out (the first lines are actually the beginning of Chapter 3) and was horribly compressed (the first chapter is already longer than the original upload) to try and fit inside the guidelines of the challenge. The current status of the rewrite is Chapter 1: Complete and posted Chapter 2: Partially done (there are a few scenes that aren't cooperating) Chapter 3: Just needs 2 posted and a little polishing Then there is a mass of outline and a few scattered scenes roughly where they belong The last three chapters of the story are in basically the same state as 3 I haven't had a lot of time for writing this year and my muse has been focused on later parts of the story when I've had time to work on it so progress has been slow, but I am going to get this story posted if it kills me. It just might take a while.
Gasuda
7/19/21, 10:39 AM
This was a fun read, and you even got me tearing up just a little at the end. Really hot, and really sweet. Good work, Wesley.
7/19/21, 9:41 AM
you should continue this story. it's rather hottt
IvorySilk
7/13/21, 8:11 PM
Great start! Looking forwards to seeing more! I'm especially curious about how this memory altering technology will factor into the story. :3

7/18/21, 9:29 PM
@IvorySilk 💖
7/18/21, 3:21 AM
Excellent first chapter! I would love to read more.

7/18/21, 9:28 PM
@Hypnoguy67 thank you so much! I'm working on editing the second chapter and hope to post it in the upcoming week!
7/18/21, 3:36 AM
Ohhhh, my God, thanks for upload this before the usual time you do! At this point maybe you're bored to hear me say how much I like this, but fuck, I can't stop it. It's truly well written, and delightfully horny, with all those small details that enrich the scene. For example, I loved how Arthur makes fun of the size of Cody's cock, ha, ha. Or mentioning the noises of Cody's boots and spurs while he's been fucked. Oh, those things really add more fuel to this hot tale! It's wonderful, man, really, really succulent.

Oddballs
7/18/21, 3:57 AM
@Plymouth58 Oh I will never get tired of hearing anyone liking my story. I actually look forward to your thoughts and reviews :D

7/18/21, 6:37 AM
@Oddballs Oh, really? oh, man, thank you so much!
7/18/21, 4:33 AM
particularly loved this chapter! 😍😍😍
6/11/20, 2:20 PM
I am going to continue this story, I have all the ideas in place, I just need the motivation to sit down and write it.

Doug
7/15/21, 8:07 PM
@Letstrythis please get the motivation!!!!