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7/24/21, 12:34 PM
I hope there is more!
Protoborg
7/24/21, 10:17 AM
Except for the rather unfortunate view of humanity from Milo at the end, this was a really good story. I hope there is a second part at some point as I would love to know how things go with the "update". It was unfortunate that Milo didn't infect more people himself. The way this was presented was a really nice touch as well. It would have been nice to actually hear from the detective, though. All around a very good story with some very minor issues. Where are my sexy, sentient nanos?!
7/23/21, 11:39 PM
I love when redneck is more than bad hygiene and bad education, its believing in a way of life and negating others.

7/23/21, 11:49 PM
@Orc-Br I've found myself struggling with some of the redneck fetish stuff lately, because it tends to lean a bit too much on stereotype and caricature. This one is by no means perfect on that front, but I'm trying to present it as something a bit more than Duck Dynasty, but sexy. I think it's the outlaw and outsider angle that I find most attractive myself. This story is just for fun of course, not too serious, but definitely something I've been thinking about in my stories as of late.
7/22/21, 6:33 PM
I'm glad to hear he will be able to mod some guys now, I hope.
7/21/21, 11:18 PM
Slow burn with splendid denoument. Get outside my head, sistah! My inner skinpig stupidly grunts in appreciation.
7/20/21, 9:46 PM
Hot. I hope there is more to come.

7/20/21, 11:41 PM
@Jonanator Thanks for the encouragement! More to come for sure. There's enough material for another 2-3 chapters so far.

7/21/21, 6:34 AM
@time.to.occur Glad to hear it. you are a great author, and you know how to make an incredible story.
7/21/21, 3:57 AM
Such incredible world-building and an intriguing story! I look forward to more chapters.

7/21/21, 3:59 AM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much for your encouraging words! We're already editing the next few, so more is definitely coming!
IvorySilk
7/20/21, 11:34 PM
Hehe, it's starting! Looking forward to more! ^^

7/20/21, 11:42 PM
@IvorySilk thanks for reading it and encouraging me to keep at it! <3
7/19/21, 12:26 PM
where is the rest of this story? I've read this before and i know it went farther then them getting on the bus!

7/19/21, 11:18 PM
@Kerwin I've started rewriting it into the multi chapter story it should have been in the first place. The original upload had a lot cut out (the first lines are actually the beginning of Chapter 3) and was horribly compressed (the first chapter is already longer than the original upload) to try and fit inside the guidelines of the challenge. The current status of the rewrite is Chapter 1: Complete and posted Chapter 2: Partially done (there are a few scenes that aren't cooperating) Chapter 3: Just needs 2 posted and a little polishing Then there is a mass of outline and a few scattered scenes roughly where they belong The last three chapters of the story are in basically the same state as 3 I haven't had a lot of time for writing this year and my muse has been focused on later parts of the story when I've had time to work on it so progress has been slow, but I am going to get this story posted if it kills me. It just might take a while.