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7/22/21, 6:33 PM
I'm glad to hear he will be able to mod some guys now, I hope.
7/21/21, 11:18 PM
Slow burn with splendid denoument. Get outside my head, sistah! My inner skinpig stupidly grunts in appreciation.
7/20/21, 9:46 PM
Hot. I hope there is more to come.

7/20/21, 11:41 PM
@Jonanator Thanks for the encouragement! More to come for sure. There's enough material for another 2-3 chapters so far.

7/21/21, 6:34 AM
@time.to.occur Glad to hear it. you are a great author, and you know how to make an incredible story.
7/21/21, 3:57 AM
Such incredible world-building and an intriguing story! I look forward to more chapters.

7/21/21, 3:59 AM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much for your encouraging words! We're already editing the next few, so more is definitely coming!
IvorySilk
7/20/21, 11:34 PM
Hehe, it's starting! Looking forward to more! ^^

7/20/21, 11:42 PM
@IvorySilk thanks for reading it and encouraging me to keep at it! <3
7/19/21, 12:26 PM
where is the rest of this story? I've read this before and i know it went farther then them getting on the bus!

7/19/21, 11:18 PM
@Kerwin I've started rewriting it into the multi chapter story it should have been in the first place. The original upload had a lot cut out (the first lines are actually the beginning of Chapter 3) and was horribly compressed (the first chapter is already longer than the original upload) to try and fit inside the guidelines of the challenge. The current status of the rewrite is Chapter 1: Complete and posted Chapter 2: Partially done (there are a few scenes that aren't cooperating) Chapter 3: Just needs 2 posted and a little polishing Then there is a mass of outline and a few scattered scenes roughly where they belong The last three chapters of the story are in basically the same state as 3 I haven't had a lot of time for writing this year and my muse has been focused on later parts of the story when I've had time to work on it so progress has been slow, but I am going to get this story posted if it kills me. It just might take a while.
Gasuda
7/19/21, 10:39 AM
This was a fun read, and you even got me tearing up just a little at the end. Really hot, and really sweet. Good work, Wesley.
7/19/21, 9:41 AM
you should continue this story. it's rather hottt
IvorySilk
7/13/21, 8:11 PM
Great start! Looking forwards to seeing more! I'm especially curious about how this memory altering technology will factor into the story. :3

7/18/21, 9:29 PM
@IvorySilk 💖
7/18/21, 3:21 AM
Excellent first chapter! I would love to read more.

7/18/21, 9:28 PM
@Hypnoguy67 thank you so much! I'm working on editing the second chapter and hope to post it in the upcoming week!