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JR
10/4/20, 9:57 AM
There can be a twist to the next story if there is one. The couple that got Bradley are actually guys he slept with previously and they are there to help him out. Maybe there can be some revenge on Paul and he's turned into a dog or something else.

8/11/21, 7:45 AM
Interesting concept but not where I see this story going. This is a cheating dick getting his commuppance and making sure he cant hurt others again. I am working on a reverse hypno story soon. Stay tuned. @JR
12/23/20, 5:27 AM
I understand that people wanted to see more of the struggle against mind control, but in terms of storytelling, there's absolutely nothing wrong with starting in media res, provided you eventually fill the reader in sufficiently and you did. Very good job.

8/11/21, 7:44 AM
Thank you!!! @amul
Jun 12, 2020
1/30/21, 2:39 PM
Not usually into puppy play but I loved this story - please give us another chapter on Spunky's training.

8/11/21, 7:43 AM
I will give it my best shot! @Max Power
2/12/21, 6:11 PM
More, please! You're a gifted writer.

8/11/21, 7:41 AM
I will try! I am trying to figure out how the other guys programming would have gone and how things would have progressed. @blankbot
3/9/21, 5:20 AM
Am I the only one who noticed that Daddy's name changed from Johnathon to Michael? Not that this detracted from the story in the slightest, but ... just a little thing I noticed. I am in LOVE with this series so far and can't wait for more! like all the above comments, I love seeing Levi all feisty and fighting, already losing and falling under Daddy's control. Really, it's just SO hot.

8/11/21, 7:38 AM
@Mind Labyrinth Yea bit of a derp moment on my part. I need to edit that.
8/10/21, 5:35 PM
Enjoyed this chapter, including its surprise ending!

8/10/21, 5:48 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! The next chapter is almost finished, and I'm looking forward to sharing Julian with you all :3!
8/9/21, 3:20 AM
This is one of the best chapters to date! I don't dare to select one as my favorite since I've enjoyed a lot with all of them and you always manage to surprise me driving me crazy with each new installment , but if I had to choose one, this would be a serious contender for the title. Probably is because, along with the dirty talk, the slutified clothes and the hot sex scenes, I love how mindfucked Zachery, Cody and Nate had to be, to be totally oblivious of the public spectacle they gave. Especially Cody, who despite having regained his conscious, he still don't think it was too bad for being exposed in public as a rampant slut for saying things like "only my daddy stuffs me like that" and "he the one who done popped mah boy-cherry last week!”. Ohh, I adore him saying those dirty things aloud!! I hope Nate be able to overcome his guilty feelings (anger?) for his behavior or at least he can steer them in a right direction. The horny/romantic part with José and Zachery was sweet, and it's a welcome addition to the series.
mcdermottr13@gmail.com
8/7/21, 11:11 PM
Please continue this story. I want to see what kind of punishment the older brothers get.
Fantasma
8/4/21, 4:07 PM
Welcome back. Had a feeling that you had abandoned here but glad to hear the life is turning around man. Keep up the great work. Emits transformation has gone great and he is at a point he deserved to be. The "forgetting" part at the start had me worried but can be seen as temporary i guess? I am waiting for the chapters that contains Eric's "redemption" arc. always had a spot for a "big cop small top" thing goin for me which i think you will satisfy greatly. Again keep up the good work and please if anything happens take your time. Hope the Best for ya.

Blackjinx123
8/7/21, 1:50 PM
@Fantasma, thank you so much for your support and I'm so glad you have enjoyed the series so far. i have no plans to quite on this story, i have too much fun writing it!
8/5/21, 11:00 AM
Glad to see this one is still alive! Great work, love that Emit now knows his place, I wonder how the brothers will react to his father’s new role in the house

Blackjinx123
8/7/21, 1:39 PM
@zeeker8b, yup! better later than never right? XD thanks so much for the support and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!