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Jun 12, 2020
K77
6/12/20, 10:30 PM
Please write another chapter about the next steps of puppy training! It's awesome.

8/11/21, 7:48 AM
Would you like to see how Spunky gets taught to bottom? @K77
9/29/20, 12:53 AM
This really had the makings of a great story, and was well written - but for me, it was missing the most important part: The setup and process of how Levi the "Thug" became Levi the "Baby". The story seems to cut straight to the aftermath.....after Levi had already been reprogrammed and brainwashed to be happy with his daddy. It would have been very hot to see the struggle, frustration and humiliation Levi experienced trying to futilely reject these changes before he finally got to this state. Honestly, had you not provided the summary at the top, i would have never realized Levi was ever a Thug in the first place. Perhaps a part 2 prologue? :)

8/11/21, 7:46 AM
Sorry about that. Was trying a different style of storytelling where we skip the first bits and join our story already in progress.@boyn2changes
9/29/20, 7:09 AM
Yeah, I need a prequel.

8/11/21, 7:45 AM
It is done!!! @ifitz
JR
10/4/20, 9:57 AM
There can be a twist to the next story if there is one. The couple that got Bradley are actually guys he slept with previously and they are there to help him out. Maybe there can be some revenge on Paul and he's turned into a dog or something else.

8/11/21, 7:45 AM
Interesting concept but not where I see this story going. This is a cheating dick getting his commuppance and making sure he cant hurt others again. I am working on a reverse hypno story soon. Stay tuned. @JR
12/23/20, 5:27 AM
I understand that people wanted to see more of the struggle against mind control, but in terms of storytelling, there's absolutely nothing wrong with starting in media res, provided you eventually fill the reader in sufficiently and you did. Very good job.

8/11/21, 7:44 AM
Thank you!!! @amul
Jun 12, 2020
1/30/21, 2:39 PM
Not usually into puppy play but I loved this story - please give us another chapter on Spunky's training.

8/11/21, 7:43 AM
I will give it my best shot! @Max Power
2/12/21, 6:11 PM
More, please! You're a gifted writer.

8/11/21, 7:41 AM
I will try! I am trying to figure out how the other guys programming would have gone and how things would have progressed. @blankbot
3/9/21, 5:20 AM
Am I the only one who noticed that Daddy's name changed from Johnathon to Michael? Not that this detracted from the story in the slightest, but ... just a little thing I noticed. I am in LOVE with this series so far and can't wait for more! like all the above comments, I love seeing Levi all feisty and fighting, already losing and falling under Daddy's control. Really, it's just SO hot.

8/11/21, 7:38 AM
@Mind Labyrinth Yea bit of a derp moment on my part. I need to edit that.
8/10/21, 5:35 PM
Enjoyed this chapter, including its surprise ending!

8/10/21, 5:48 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! The next chapter is almost finished, and I'm looking forward to sharing Julian with you all :3!
8/9/21, 3:20 AM
This is one of the best chapters to date! I don't dare to select one as my favorite since I've enjoyed a lot with all of them and you always manage to surprise me driving me crazy with each new installment , but if I had to choose one, this would be a serious contender for the title. Probably is because, along with the dirty talk, the slutified clothes and the hot sex scenes, I love how mindfucked Zachery, Cody and Nate had to be, to be totally oblivious of the public spectacle they gave. Especially Cody, who despite having regained his conscious, he still don't think it was too bad for being exposed in public as a rampant slut for saying things like "only my daddy stuffs me like that" and "he the one who done popped mah boy-cherry last week!”. Ohh, I adore him saying those dirty things aloud!! I hope Nate be able to overcome his guilty feelings (anger?) for his behavior or at least he can steer them in a right direction. The horny/romantic part with José and Zachery was sweet, and it's a welcome addition to the series.