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8/5/21, 7:20 PM
Please continue with the brothers humiliation! Erik becoming a true pain pig and taking away Eli's masculinity would be tru;y hot. Dad's final humliation being outed to his buddies would be over the top. Then a nice wrap up with Uncle Mac finding out how the tables had turned would be nice. Really enjoyed and I got off a couple of times also! Keep up the good writing!

Blackjinx123
8/7/21, 1:44 PM
@ozplays, I'm happy you enjoyed it! no worries, i havnt forgotten the brothers (and a certain uncle everyone is excited about) theres still way more karma coming their way! ;)

8/9/21, 9:32 PM
@Blackjinx123 thanks for your great storylines. Your only mentioning some possible punishment to Emit gives some hope you will use it to some familymembers in future. Tattoos, branding, piercing will be great to read when one of them will be the receiver. In my fantasies Erik is already the cop slut.

Blackjinx123
8/9/21, 10:25 PM
@uniform53, there will definitely be piercings and tattoos in the Kingston families future, no worries!

8/11/21, 10:18 PM
@Blackjinx123, thanks for your info. You have created a situation in which Vincent could use all the variations of his diverse fantasies to his family. Hope you find a way Erik is at work verbal and sexual abused by a group of thugs. The most muscular and active thug could be asked as his master in one of his extreme pornvideos. .
6/20/20, 7:13 AM
Love it, as a good Mormon boy myself ;)

8/11/21, 7:47 AM
Hehe. Mormon boys make the best toys. Your already so used to listening to orders. @hypnocollar

8/11/21, 9:24 PM
mmmm thank you Sir @Alpha Artemis
Anonymous
8/11/21, 8:54 PM
This was hot!! Looking forward to more
6/8/20, 7:25 AM
Love this I hope there is more to this. Nothing more hot then a straight guy turn gay by a demon.

8/11/21, 7:50 AM
It's less he has been turned gay and more hes just enslaved to the demons will. If he could he would stop himself from doing any of this. But he is basically magically ensnared. Least thats how I always saw it hehe. @Redcoma100
6/8/20, 1:18 PM
For the most part it's just as hot as I would imagine being enslaved by an incubus would be. But some proofreading beyond spell check would benefit this tale greatly. Many of your "were"s are written as "where"s, and there were one or two "well"s instead of "while"s. Otherwise, a few forgivable typos, and I'm still hard thinking of the tail edging your cock. Keep going!

8/11/21, 7:49 AM
Yea sorry. Really really bad habit is my mind working faster then my hands can keep up. And I did not pay nearly enough attention in english class haha. @PEN15LUVR
Jun 12, 2020
K77
6/12/20, 10:30 PM
Please write another chapter about the next steps of puppy training! It's awesome.

8/11/21, 7:48 AM
Would you like to see how Spunky gets taught to bottom? @K77
9/29/20, 12:53 AM
This really had the makings of a great story, and was well written - but for me, it was missing the most important part: The setup and process of how Levi the "Thug" became Levi the "Baby". The story seems to cut straight to the aftermath.....after Levi had already been reprogrammed and brainwashed to be happy with his daddy. It would have been very hot to see the struggle, frustration and humiliation Levi experienced trying to futilely reject these changes before he finally got to this state. Honestly, had you not provided the summary at the top, i would have never realized Levi was ever a Thug in the first place. Perhaps a part 2 prologue? :)

8/11/21, 7:46 AM
Sorry about that. Was trying a different style of storytelling where we skip the first bits and join our story already in progress.@boyn2changes
9/29/20, 7:09 AM
Yeah, I need a prequel.

8/11/21, 7:45 AM
It is done!!! @ifitz
JR
10/4/20, 9:57 AM
There can be a twist to the next story if there is one. The couple that got Bradley are actually guys he slept with previously and they are there to help him out. Maybe there can be some revenge on Paul and he's turned into a dog or something else.

8/11/21, 7:45 AM
Interesting concept but not where I see this story going. This is a cheating dick getting his commuppance and making sure he cant hurt others again. I am working on a reverse hypno story soon. Stay tuned. @JR
12/23/20, 5:27 AM
I understand that people wanted to see more of the struggle against mind control, but in terms of storytelling, there's absolutely nothing wrong with starting in media res, provided you eventually fill the reader in sufficiently and you did. Very good job.

8/11/21, 7:44 AM
Thank you!!! @amul