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Oct 10, 2021
Martin
8/23/21, 8:52 PM
Would you like to publish that on GayCollarStories once it's been opened? Can't be that long...

8/24/21, 1:09 AM
@Martin Absolutely. Whatever you think is most appropriate.
8/22/21, 12:50 PM
And then Minty left a glowing positive review for the house on AirBnB.
8/22/21, 3:29 AM
I want to echo what Plymouth said. As a one-off, the stripper episode was funny and all, but since the series is on-going it had to be addressed and Charlie handled it as a decent person should. He may be a pervert but I'd hate to think he was a psychopath.
8/22/21, 3:16 AM
Charlie making the professor a narcissist and using that to seduce him instead of just writing "is gay and into chubby guys" was a strong writing choice by the author. It plays out very well.
8/21/21, 2:06 PM
I love your work. But I'm not a fan of undoing the previous stipulations. I love how you focus on the humiliation of your characters and everything isn't only sex-focused. And this chapter took a lot of that away, in my opinion. Having the professor have a humiliating bout the of giggles in every day situations would have been so entertaining. A bit of a let down for me by this chapter, but still love your work. Just wanted to comment since there wasn't many of this story and wanted to give my feedback.
Leo
8/18/21, 12:33 AM
Such a hot chapter, thank you for the fast update!! <3 I love everything you've done so far! My only request is that the dad becomes an obedient servant/butler who cooks, cleans, foot worships and sexually pleases his son. I would also love it if they all referred to Vince as master from now on. Let them all know who controls their lives ;)

Blackjinx123
8/19/21, 11:59 PM
@Leo, you are most welcome, and I'm so happy you like the series so far! i will say, there will be a house slave, but i wont spoil who it will be! i suppose you'll just have to keep reading if you want to know ;)
Jack
8/17/21, 7:10 AM
This was just good writing. Having both perspectives anchored by the sex going on between Vince and Emit? Brilliant. Love how well it ties the three stories together. It's not an easy thing to do, and I wouldn't be able to do it better, even if I was reduced to one hand for how often this story is making me jack off (or no hands, depending on how exciting I want my evening to be). I have to hand it to you, BlackJinx, you're really bringing some impressive talent to this site. I have stories I wanted to publish on here, and now I have to up my game just to try to get some readers! My one and only suggestion is, as always, another 200,000 words or so. You know, just in case.

Blackjinx123
8/19/21, 11:57 PM
@Jack, thank you so much for the praise! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. i have a feeling that by the time i finish this series your 200,000 word goal will either have been met or surpassed, so stick around! ;)
8/18/21, 8:03 PM
Chapter 13* specifically. Their original meeting is in chapter 5.

8/19/21, 8:37 AM
@Norismo Oh boy, yes, that's a bit complicated. Okay, so it's another version of the meeting, with the changes from the latter chapters? Okay, it makes a lot more sense that way. Still confused by the manor bit, but that might get explained later on.
8/18/21, 7:10 PM
A huge follower of the main story on GSS. And now I'm even more confused on how much is/was changed by Billy Bonkers. It's great to see more from other people's perspective, but how the hell did Jack have memories of Daniel as an ex before Daniel was even there, but then the manor??? Really romantic, but oh boy was putting it in Dalton Creek made me think way too much about the lore and what is happening in the main story to fully enjoy.

8/18/21, 8:01 PM
@BobbyBlobfish I love the lore! Thanks for the support. This is basically happening during part 3 of the "Dream" bit, not chapter 4 (?) Right before Daniel wakes up. Daniel's memories of their meeting are also changed. It is a huge mess honestly. You need a pen and paper to follow along at this point . I might have to make a forum post ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
8/17/21, 3:28 AM
This was a great idea for a submission! I thought it was cool that the place was a gay polyam commune, and it was fun reading about how Billy Bonkers affected the excessive order. You set up Jack's life well, why he wanted to change, and how Daniel rescued him. It seemed like some of the plot elements came out of nowhere, but that *is* how life tends to work - not much foreshadowing. It felt similar to stream-of-consciousness literature. One thing I would suggest is adding punctuation to the end of all your dialogue. All the other writing has full punctuation and correct spelling and looks good, so it's kind of jarring whenever a quote doesn't end in the proper punctuation, and it makes the writing appear lazy - falsely, since your writing is good here.

8/17/21, 6:23 AM
@Soren Fitz Ah, grammar, my old nemesis. Read on its own the story elements are rather random, but this is actually a "Midnight Sun" if Dalton Creek on Gay Spiral was "Twilight". That story is... something. It's the same story elements told from the other perspective. This is like a Disney version of Dalton Creek's Grimm fairytales. I wanted this story to function as a stand-alone, maybe the start of a series of one-offs where different duos from the commune go on dates and things.

8/17/21, 12:53 PM
@Norismo That makes so much more sense now! I noticed a few hours after reading that you had posted twenty-three chapters of Dalton Creek stories in the past, and now I understand whatโ€™s going on.