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8/31/21, 7:23 PM
hottt. hope more is to come.

8/31/21, 9:43 PM
@Jonanator thank you so much! definitely more coming!

8/31/21, 9:47 PM
@time.to.occur Great, it's my favorite story. I do have on question, and you can choose to answer it or not, does Rhys actually love Jasper?

8/31/21, 11:52 PM
@Jonanator aww, thank you! And I think I'd answer that question this way: Rhys does have very strong feelings for Jasper but I don't think even he knows yet whether he loves him! Here's what Cuddle-switch says: "Rhys isn't stopping to think about what his feelings are. If you were to ask him, he would say that of course he isn't in love. If he were to stop and think about it, he would wonder because he does have strong feelings. In my mind, I haven't firmly decided if he's in love or just interested and infatuated. Who knows where those feelings will take him?"

8/31/21, 11:57 PM
@time.to.occur Well, then I'll have to wait for more to see if it leads to a romantic love or not. I'm loving this. you two have done a really great Story. Can't wait. I'm a die hard fan now.

9/1/21, 12:05 AM
@Jonanator We're both so glad to hear to hear that and look forward to writing and posting more!

9/1/21, 12:08 AM
@time.to.occur Great. can't wait. Enjoy your night.
Elm
8/30/21, 4:11 AM
Yes! I finally have the proper time to enjoy this story. Thanks for taking the time again!
Good Barkley
8/25/21, 2:56 PM
I loved the start to this story. then how it progressed. I was wondering if I would love to be Barkley, for a short time, so free of all worries and so eager to Play. so all in All, I loved it, so thanks
8/25/21, 7:03 AM
I like how mindfucked everybody is at this point: José talking about himself as "enamorada” (a form to say a lady is in love in Spanish); Nate acting so macho after power bottoming with his friend; but my favorite had to be Cody being such a rampant slut who's happy to debase himself and allows other men to ridicule him in exchange of sex. Above all, he seems so proud to tell everyone knows what his father and him does behind closed doors. He is undoubtedly the best mindfuck in the story (that's saying a lot! , especially compared of how he used to be. Oh, man, you have no idea how happy you make me with every new chapter.

Oddballs
8/25/21, 8:18 AM
@Plymouth58 Weeeeeell, if I'm being honest, I get all of my Spanish lines from Google Translate; I wanted to make Jose be as authentic as I could, so I typed up the sentences in English and translated it to Spanish and copy/pasted the translation. The only language I've tried to learn was 2 years of Japanese in high school, and hell if I remember most of it, if any at all. So the part of Jose referring to himself with a female pronoun is a dumb mess up on MY part >_>

8/25/21, 11:13 AM
@Oddballs oh, really? ha, ha, I thought it was intentional! you see, in Spanish, many words have a masculine or feminine form depending on the subject on the sentence, and recently Google Translate has been offering translations in feminine as the first option (in an effort to be more inclusive, I suppose), and while it sometimes includes both forms, it doesn't always do so, or it's not very clear about it nor how to use it. You can get a better translation if you specify who is the subject in the sentence, writing it like "I'm in love, he said", so it will give you the right gender, like "estoy enamorado, él dijo". But if you have some doubt about words in Spanish, I'd be happy to help you. I'm checking the site from time to time, so it won't take me long to reply 🙂
Geo
8/24/21, 3:21 AM
It's so awesome to get to read more from you. I LOVED this chapter. Honestly, you made the brothers so thoroughly deserving of punishment that seeing it come little by little makes it all the more fun to see them get messed around with and turned into frustrated and sexually-confused playthings. I love how you wrote Eli and Erik's shame over the new feelings, I definitely see that as the highlight that makes revisiting the chapters fun! I just hope Vince will let them get some public exposure or embarrassment. I love the idea of their macho egos being cracked apart bit-by-bit if their friends or co-workers (or better yet rivals) see them in their new lingere and notice the brothers being aroused by being noticed in that state. It'd be fun to see the tables turn for their macho reputations.

Blackjinx123
8/24/21, 4:40 PM
@Geo, thank you so much for your kind words and compliments, I'm flattered! I had so much fun writing this chapter (especially Eli's section), I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! As for what your hoping to see, I have some idea's in the works that run in that vein, but I'm not about to spoil it ;) thanks so much for sticking with the story and all the wonderfully motivating comments!
8/24/21, 5:59 AM
beautiful. really hoping to see this continued!
Oct 10, 2021
Martin
8/23/21, 8:52 PM
Would you like to publish that on GayCollarStories once it's been opened? Can't be that long...

8/24/21, 1:09 AM
@Martin Absolutely. Whatever you think is most appropriate.
8/22/21, 12:50 PM
And then Minty left a glowing positive review for the house on AirBnB.
8/22/21, 3:29 AM
I want to echo what Plymouth said. As a one-off, the stripper episode was funny and all, but since the series is on-going it had to be addressed and Charlie handled it as a decent person should. He may be a pervert but I'd hate to think he was a psychopath.
8/22/21, 3:16 AM
Charlie making the professor a narcissist and using that to seduce him instead of just writing "is gay and into chubby guys" was a strong writing choice by the author. It plays out very well.