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8/25/21, 7:03 AM
I like how mindfucked everybody is at this point: José talking about himself as "enamorada” (a form to say a lady is in love in Spanish); Nate acting so macho after power bottoming with his friend; but my favorite had to be Cody being such a rampant slut who's happy to debase himself and allows other men to ridicule him in exchange of sex. Above all, he seems so proud to tell everyone knows what his father and him does behind closed doors. He is undoubtedly the best mindfuck in the story (that's saying a lot! , especially compared of how he used to be. Oh, man, you have no idea how happy you make me with every new chapter.

Oddballs
8/25/21, 8:18 AM
@Plymouth58 Weeeeeell, if I'm being honest, I get all of my Spanish lines from Google Translate; I wanted to make Jose be as authentic as I could, so I typed up the sentences in English and translated it to Spanish and copy/pasted the translation. The only language I've tried to learn was 2 years of Japanese in high school, and hell if I remember most of it, if any at all. So the part of Jose referring to himself with a female pronoun is a dumb mess up on MY part >_>

8/25/21, 11:13 AM
@Oddballs oh, really? ha, ha, I thought it was intentional! you see, in Spanish, many words have a masculine or feminine form depending on the subject on the sentence, and recently Google Translate has been offering translations in feminine as the first option (in an effort to be more inclusive, I suppose), and while it sometimes includes both forms, it doesn't always do so, or it's not very clear about it nor how to use it. You can get a better translation if you specify who is the subject in the sentence, writing it like "I'm in love, he said", so it will give you the right gender, like "estoy enamorado, él dijo". But if you have some doubt about words in Spanish, I'd be happy to help you. I'm checking the site from time to time, so it won't take me long to reply 🙂
Geo
8/24/21, 3:21 AM
It's so awesome to get to read more from you. I LOVED this chapter. Honestly, you made the brothers so thoroughly deserving of punishment that seeing it come little by little makes it all the more fun to see them get messed around with and turned into frustrated and sexually-confused playthings. I love how you wrote Eli and Erik's shame over the new feelings, I definitely see that as the highlight that makes revisiting the chapters fun! I just hope Vince will let them get some public exposure or embarrassment. I love the idea of their macho egos being cracked apart bit-by-bit if their friends or co-workers (or better yet rivals) see them in their new lingere and notice the brothers being aroused by being noticed in that state. It'd be fun to see the tables turn for their macho reputations.

Blackjinx123
8/24/21, 4:40 PM
@Geo, thank you so much for your kind words and compliments, I'm flattered! I had so much fun writing this chapter (especially Eli's section), I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! As for what your hoping to see, I have some idea's in the works that run in that vein, but I'm not about to spoil it ;) thanks so much for sticking with the story and all the wonderfully motivating comments!
8/24/21, 5:59 AM
beautiful. really hoping to see this continued!
Oct 10, 2021
Martin
8/23/21, 8:52 PM
Would you like to publish that on GayCollarStories once it's been opened? Can't be that long...

8/24/21, 1:09 AM
@Martin Absolutely. Whatever you think is most appropriate.
8/22/21, 12:50 PM
And then Minty left a glowing positive review for the house on AirBnB.
8/22/21, 3:29 AM
I want to echo what Plymouth said. As a one-off, the stripper episode was funny and all, but since the series is on-going it had to be addressed and Charlie handled it as a decent person should. He may be a pervert but I'd hate to think he was a psychopath.
8/22/21, 3:16 AM
Charlie making the professor a narcissist and using that to seduce him instead of just writing "is gay and into chubby guys" was a strong writing choice by the author. It plays out very well.
8/21/21, 2:06 PM
I love your work. But I'm not a fan of undoing the previous stipulations. I love how you focus on the humiliation of your characters and everything isn't only sex-focused. And this chapter took a lot of that away, in my opinion. Having the professor have a humiliating bout the of giggles in every day situations would have been so entertaining. A bit of a let down for me by this chapter, but still love your work. Just wanted to comment since there wasn't many of this story and wanted to give my feedback.
Leo
8/18/21, 12:33 AM
Such a hot chapter, thank you for the fast update!! <3 I love everything you've done so far! My only request is that the dad becomes an obedient servant/butler who cooks, cleans, foot worships and sexually pleases his son. I would also love it if they all referred to Vince as master from now on. Let them all know who controls their lives ;)

Blackjinx123
8/19/21, 11:59 PM
@Leo, you are most welcome, and I'm so happy you like the series so far! i will say, there will be a house slave, but i wont spoil who it will be! i suppose you'll just have to keep reading if you want to know ;)
Jack
8/17/21, 7:10 AM
This was just good writing. Having both perspectives anchored by the sex going on between Vince and Emit? Brilliant. Love how well it ties the three stories together. It's not an easy thing to do, and I wouldn't be able to do it better, even if I was reduced to one hand for how often this story is making me jack off (or no hands, depending on how exciting I want my evening to be). I have to hand it to you, BlackJinx, you're really bringing some impressive talent to this site. I have stories I wanted to publish on here, and now I have to up my game just to try to get some readers! My one and only suggestion is, as always, another 200,000 words or so. You know, just in case.

Blackjinx123
8/19/21, 11:57 PM
@Jack, thank you so much for the praise! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. i have a feeling that by the time i finish this series your 200,000 word goal will either have been met or surpassed, so stick around! ;)