Recent Comments

Jack
8/30/21, 4:16 PM
Obviously, I loved it. But Emit making multiple attempts to seduce Vince? God, that's hot. I love stories where the controller occasionally loses control, and I feel like we're building to some seriously intense fucking here. Can't wait to see where all of this goes, especially with the brothers! Erik is definitely my type of guy, with all those young sexy muscles and an endless supply of lust and cum. Oof. Sign me up.

Blackjinx123
9/1/21, 4:00 AM
@Jack, thank you! There is definitely some fantastic fucking that is going to happen in the future, so stay tuned! And Erik is certainly a catch... minus the shit personality, but Vince is fixing that ;)
Elm
8/30/21, 3:06 PM
Another great entry to one of the best stories on this site! I just love how the dad acts... I would love to see what our protagonist can do to others tough... I seem to remember an awful friend of his dad from the first chapter... I think he would make for an excellent test subject for the more... involved changes.

Jack
8/30/21, 4:13 PM
@Elm You're right. That douchebag deserves some of Vince's more intense punishments. I hope the author takes our votes into consideration!

Blackjinx123
9/1/21, 3:56 AM
@Elm, wow, thank you for the compliment! I can confirm that Sam will be making an appearance eventually, but I wont spoil how he fits in the story. You'll just have to read on to find out ;)
mcdermottr13@gmail.com
8/29/21, 3:41 PM
I am really enjoying this story. Excited to see where you're taking each character. The father is well on his way to be broken, but the brothers. Like l said so excited. Waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter.

Blackjinx123
9/1/21, 3:54 AM
@mcdermottr13@gmail.com, I'm happy to hear it! The next chapter should be up in a couple weeks, thanks so much for sticking with the story!
8/29/21, 3:23 PM
WOW! We waited long for this series to continue but it did not disappoint. I love the different Power dynamics Vince has with his family members. i can't wait to see his cop brother in full uniform join in

Blackjinx123
9/1/21, 3:49 AM
@ForgottenCradle, I'm so glad you've enjoyed it thus far! And don't worry, the uniform will come into play eventually ;)
8/29/21, 10:50 AM
you really have a talent in it, seriously. may be you could make one of them act like vince's girlfriend.

Blackjinx123
9/1/21, 3:47 AM
@TimDrake22, thank you so much! You'll have to keep reading if you want to see all the tropes I use in this series. I have a lot of ideas in the works!
8/29/21, 4:55 AM
wow. just wow. youre an amazing writer and i love hoe youre planning to take things slowly and well written. please continue using his dad no matter what!

Blackjinx123
9/1/21, 3:45 AM
@Erratic101, thank you for the compliment and for sticking with the story! And no worries, Emit isn't going anywhere ;)
8/29/21, 3:21 AM
Well, I must say WOW, well done. So far I'm delighted on how you impersonate the narration here... and of course, as a fan of Big sub Small top, I approve this lol the only thing that could make this even greater would be to add feet into the equation, but thats just me and my personal taste, you do you :) Also, since I mentioned personal taste, and since I read in the chapter he is looking for someone else to try his enslavement, I hope its another dilf, maybe a teacher or a classmate plus his dad <3

Blackjinx123
9/1/21, 3:44 AM
@Udems, thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! As to who the test subject will be... I wont spoil it, but i will say that he deserves his fate.
8/31/21, 7:23 PM
hottt. hope more is to come.

8/31/21, 9:43 PM
@Jonanator thank you so much! definitely more coming!

8/31/21, 9:47 PM
@time.to.occur Great, it's my favorite story. I do have on question, and you can choose to answer it or not, does Rhys actually love Jasper?

8/31/21, 11:52 PM
@Jonanator aww, thank you! And I think I'd answer that question this way: Rhys does have very strong feelings for Jasper but I don't think even he knows yet whether he loves him! Here's what Cuddle-switch says: "Rhys isn't stopping to think about what his feelings are. If you were to ask him, he would say that of course he isn't in love. If he were to stop and think about it, he would wonder because he does have strong feelings. In my mind, I haven't firmly decided if he's in love or just interested and infatuated. Who knows where those feelings will take him?"

8/31/21, 11:57 PM
@time.to.occur Well, then I'll have to wait for more to see if it leads to a romantic love or not. I'm loving this. you two have done a really great Story. Can't wait. I'm a die hard fan now.

9/1/21, 12:05 AM
@Jonanator We're both so glad to hear to hear that and look forward to writing and posting more!

9/1/21, 12:08 AM
@time.to.occur Great. can't wait. Enjoy your night.
Elm
8/30/21, 4:11 AM
Yes! I finally have the proper time to enjoy this story. Thanks for taking the time again!
Good Barkley
8/25/21, 2:56 PM
I loved the start to this story. then how it progressed. I was wondering if I would love to be Barkley, for a short time, so free of all worries and so eager to Play. so all in All, I loved it, so thanks