Recent Comments

mcdermottr13@gmail.com
8/29/21, 3:41 PM
I am really enjoying this story. Excited to see where you're taking each character. The father is well on his way to be broken, but the brothers. Like l said so excited. Waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter.

Blackjinx123
9/1/21, 3:54 AM
@mcdermottr13@gmail.com, I'm happy to hear it! The next chapter should be up in a couple weeks, thanks so much for sticking with the story!
8/29/21, 3:23 PM
WOW! We waited long for this series to continue but it did not disappoint. I love the different Power dynamics Vince has with his family members. i can't wait to see his cop brother in full uniform join in

Blackjinx123
9/1/21, 3:49 AM
@ForgottenCradle, I'm so glad you've enjoyed it thus far! And don't worry, the uniform will come into play eventually ;)
8/29/21, 10:50 AM
you really have a talent in it, seriously. may be you could make one of them act like vince's girlfriend.

Blackjinx123
9/1/21, 3:47 AM
@TimDrake22, thank you so much! You'll have to keep reading if you want to see all the tropes I use in this series. I have a lot of ideas in the works!
8/29/21, 4:55 AM
wow. just wow. youre an amazing writer and i love hoe youre planning to take things slowly and well written. please continue using his dad no matter what!

Blackjinx123
9/1/21, 3:45 AM
@Erratic101, thank you for the compliment and for sticking with the story! And no worries, Emit isn't going anywhere ;)
8/29/21, 3:21 AM
Well, I must say WOW, well done. So far I'm delighted on how you impersonate the narration here... and of course, as a fan of Big sub Small top, I approve this lol the only thing that could make this even greater would be to add feet into the equation, but thats just me and my personal taste, you do you :) Also, since I mentioned personal taste, and since I read in the chapter he is looking for someone else to try his enslavement, I hope its another dilf, maybe a teacher or a classmate plus his dad <3

Blackjinx123
9/1/21, 3:44 AM
@Udems, thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! As to who the test subject will be... I wont spoil it, but i will say that he deserves his fate.
8/31/21, 7:23 PM
hottt. hope more is to come.

8/31/21, 9:43 PM
@Jonanator thank you so much! definitely more coming!

8/31/21, 9:47 PM
@time.to.occur Great, it's my favorite story. I do have on question, and you can choose to answer it or not, does Rhys actually love Jasper?

8/31/21, 11:52 PM
@Jonanator aww, thank you! And I think I'd answer that question this way: Rhys does have very strong feelings for Jasper but I don't think even he knows yet whether he loves him! Here's what Cuddle-switch says: "Rhys isn't stopping to think about what his feelings are. If you were to ask him, he would say that of course he isn't in love. If he were to stop and think about it, he would wonder because he does have strong feelings. In my mind, I haven't firmly decided if he's in love or just interested and infatuated. Who knows where those feelings will take him?"

8/31/21, 11:57 PM
@time.to.occur Well, then I'll have to wait for more to see if it leads to a romantic love or not. I'm loving this. you two have done a really great Story. Can't wait. I'm a die hard fan now.

9/1/21, 12:05 AM
@Jonanator We're both so glad to hear to hear that and look forward to writing and posting more!

9/1/21, 12:08 AM
@time.to.occur Great. can't wait. Enjoy your night.
Elm
8/30/21, 4:11 AM
Yes! I finally have the proper time to enjoy this story. Thanks for taking the time again!
Good Barkley
8/25/21, 2:56 PM
I loved the start to this story. then how it progressed. I was wondering if I would love to be Barkley, for a short time, so free of all worries and so eager to Play. so all in All, I loved it, so thanks
8/25/21, 7:03 AM
I like how mindfucked everybody is at this point: José talking about himself as "enamorada” (a form to say a lady is in love in Spanish); Nate acting so macho after power bottoming with his friend; but my favorite had to be Cody being such a rampant slut who's happy to debase himself and allows other men to ridicule him in exchange of sex. Above all, he seems so proud to tell everyone knows what his father and him does behind closed doors. He is undoubtedly the best mindfuck in the story (that's saying a lot! , especially compared of how he used to be. Oh, man, you have no idea how happy you make me with every new chapter.

Oddballs
8/25/21, 8:18 AM
@Plymouth58 Weeeeeell, if I'm being honest, I get all of my Spanish lines from Google Translate; I wanted to make Jose be as authentic as I could, so I typed up the sentences in English and translated it to Spanish and copy/pasted the translation. The only language I've tried to learn was 2 years of Japanese in high school, and hell if I remember most of it, if any at all. So the part of Jose referring to himself with a female pronoun is a dumb mess up on MY part >_>

8/25/21, 11:13 AM
@Oddballs oh, really? ha, ha, I thought it was intentional! you see, in Spanish, many words have a masculine or feminine form depending on the subject on the sentence, and recently Google Translate has been offering translations in feminine as the first option (in an effort to be more inclusive, I suppose), and while it sometimes includes both forms, it doesn't always do so, or it's not very clear about it nor how to use it. You can get a better translation if you specify who is the subject in the sentence, writing it like "I'm in love, he said", so it will give you the right gender, like "estoy enamorado, él dijo". But if you have some doubt about words in Spanish, I'd be happy to help you. I'm checking the site from time to time, so it won't take me long to reply 🙂
Geo
8/24/21, 3:21 AM
It's so awesome to get to read more from you. I LOVED this chapter. Honestly, you made the brothers so thoroughly deserving of punishment that seeing it come little by little makes it all the more fun to see them get messed around with and turned into frustrated and sexually-confused playthings. I love how you wrote Eli and Erik's shame over the new feelings, I definitely see that as the highlight that makes revisiting the chapters fun! I just hope Vince will let them get some public exposure or embarrassment. I love the idea of their macho egos being cracked apart bit-by-bit if their friends or co-workers (or better yet rivals) see them in their new lingere and notice the brothers being aroused by being noticed in that state. It'd be fun to see the tables turn for their macho reputations.

Blackjinx123
8/24/21, 4:40 PM
@Geo, thank you so much for your kind words and compliments, I'm flattered! I had so much fun writing this chapter (especially Eli's section), I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! As for what your hoping to see, I have some idea's in the works that run in that vein, but I'm not about to spoil it ;) thanks so much for sticking with the story and all the wonderfully motivating comments!