Recent Comments

9/23/21, 2:27 AM
Continuing to enjoy this story and looking forward to more. I'm especially curious as to what awaits Jasper in his future training. Great story!

9/23/21, 1:07 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much! It's great to know what parts of the story have you curious!
9/23/21, 1:02 AM
hot. can't wait for more.

9/23/21, 1:06 PM
@Jonanator thank you! we look forward to writing more!
9/22/21, 11:48 PM
This story shows great promise with extremely likeable characters and the start of some interesting plot lines. Looking forward to where you take the story next!
9/22/21, 11:31 PM
Ooo. I can't wait for more. Hope a part two is coming.
Sexcrab
9/22/21, 11:11 PM
The hook for the next one is great and all, but the highlight was finally seeing that Arthur used like the sexy daddy bear he is. I looked forward to this about 10 chapters ago and I wasn't disappointed. I really want to see Arthur used as a whore, preferably by Milo.
Anonymous
9/22/21, 10:33 PM
can't wait for the next chapter
9/20/21, 2:45 AM
hate to see Milo leave so soon. but im really loving this series.
9/19/21, 6:03 PM
At least we could see Dad lose his virginity <3
9/14/21, 11:38 PM
i wonder what the possible effects of eli having heard Erik's trigger phrase might be? sure he has only heard it once, and he has no idea what it could do, but what kinds of trouble could a smart, vindictive, jealous, middle sibling do with his elder brother's trigger before Vince finds out? just a thought.

Blackjinx123
9/18/21, 2:06 AM
@Mind Labyrinth, what a great thought that is! I'll say this definitely got the creative juices flowing ;)

9/18/21, 8:55 AM
@Blackjinx123 *Squealing and clapping* What a wonderful thing to hear that i inspired such a talented storyteller!