Recent Comments

10/10/21, 5:10 AM
Well done, man! Glad to see you returning to this series!! Gor my part I'd love to see either sex demon or werewolf, but I definitely think you should go woth what you think will work best with your writing style - after all, writing a half-dozen demon summonings will be a heavy lift!
10/10/21, 4:09 AM
This is my most "check back to see if the author has continued it" story on the site.
10/10/21, 3:30 AM
Just finished the story from the start. I'm loving it, and love that you're letting comments vote on the next card. I would like to suggest when you do count the votes, maybe count them in a different way to make ties feasable? It would be difficult depending on the number of votes, but like... counting each option's votes, subtracting the lowest option from all 3 (so the lowest has 0 now), and then if one option has twice as much as the other or more, it wins, but if it's less than that, then both are chosen. Either way, My vote is for werewolves! I'm excited to read the next part, Happy Halloween!
10/10/21, 1:12 AM
Trick or treat
9/26/21, 12:14 AM
before i get to mac i want to say this: i love how little lying is in this chapter. Vince doesn't lie to his uncle hardly at all, and neither does Emit to Sam. Sure, they leave out details, but they are honest and don't try to hide whats happened over the past few days by putting up any veneer of 'nothing to see here! no changes! all normal!' and i really enjoyed that from both of them. Mac's flaw is so dangerous. conversion therapy? zero privacy? treating a grown adult with zero agency? all under the guise of "but you wont get hit or treated with anything but well intentioned emotional abuse, so that's better, right?" he doesn't see the problem with his point of view, or his offer. No wonder Vince gravitated to him, of the four of them, Mac is the most subtle of abusive styles of homophobia. hoping for a "PROUD and OUT doting husband" build for Mac. one that makes his dad his wanton slut he keeps at his heels, while sitting next to his uncle and getting the loving relationship fantasy he wants and needs. he can even threaten his father and brothers that he is going to go live with his uncle so he will only be so available to work in his family's punishments. i don't think thats a good idea, because the ready access is necessary to begin and tailor their punishments. still, its a good motivator. not sure what to do with sam. He runs a gym, so either making him workout all the time healthily possible to 'sweat' out his shittiest aspects, or giving him an unreasonable craving for fattening food every time he thinks something homophobic but then make him attracted to his own fat, maybe?

9/27/21, 7:08 AM
@Mind Labyrinth I love the addition of Mac and now it's getting me interested in how he would seek forgiveness from Vince. The physical pain Erik caused means he must seek pleasure in pain. The mental anguish Eli caused means he must seek pleasure in humiliation. The neglect Emit caused means he must seek pleasure in subservience and dependency. Mac is another angle to explore, where he wanted to force his views on Vince. I like your take where Mac becomes out loud and proud and brings Emit to heel. Emit also needs someone to keep him and his holes busy in Vince's stead while Vince doles out and molds Eli and Erik. And whenever Sam enters the picture, having all four under thumb and blissed out in their punishments would certainly be helpful.

Blackjinx123
10/3/21, 3:46 AM
@Mind Labyrinth, I'm so glad you liked the chapter, and thank you for your feedback! as for Mac's new persona, while i dont want to spoil anything, your not far off. stay tuned for the big reveal! as for Sam, no worries, I have plans for him ;) thanks for sticking with the story and the big, beautiful comment!

Blackjinx123
10/3/21, 3:50 AM
@sexydance10sp,I'm glad your enjoying the series so far, and happy to see that the poetic justice of Erik,Eli, and Emit's punishment wasnt lost along the way. keep reading to find out the fate of all the assholes in Vince's life :)

10/3/21, 5:00 AM
@Blackjinx123 I love getting the update emails that tell me you've updated! i am so admiring that even though this is your first posted fic, that you've stuck with it as impressively as you have. I always delight in waiting patiently for another chapter, because i would hate for you to feel rushed or pressured to write something that is clearly a labor of love. Thank you for sharing this with us time and again!

Blackjinx123
10/9/21, 7:00 AM
@Mind Labyrinth, your spoiling me with all your comments! but in all seriousness, thank you so much for your kind words and feedback. an author is nothing without their readers. thank you for your continued support! as for your patients for another chapter, it will be rewarded within the next few days :D

10/9/21, 11:19 PM
@Blackjinx123 *high pitched undignified squealing* ... … ……… AHEM! How wonderful!

10/9/21, 11:47 PM
@Mind Labyrinth I think the reaction was apropriated, just like i had seeing the League of legends world championship
10/9/21, 7:44 PM
really liked it, would have enjoyed more description of guys transforming, but parts there were awesome. looking forward to next part, if sex demon wins be hot if zeke gets revenge by using one
Sam
10/9/21, 4:17 PM
SEX DEMONSSSSS!!!!!!
10/9/21, 4:12 PM
I can haz sex demon plz?
10/9/21, 3:44 PM
No need to apologize! I really enjoyed this chapter. And I think you made the right call. If you had gone into a ton of detail for seven full days there's a chance it would've become repetitive and too complicated. Whereas this was a super fun concept and kept it moving. Though I'm still sad Ass Roulette didn't win. :P For next week I gotta vote Option 2.
Juan
10/9/21, 3:01 PM
werewolves please !