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10/11/21, 12:30 AM
this is so well written and amazing, im always so happy when i see a new chapter. adding mac into the mix is awesome.

Blackjinx123
10/11/21, 12:33 AM
@Mordred, thank you so much for the compliment! I'm always so happy to see a return reader in the comments. glad you enjoyed this chapter. p.s. i love your username :D
10/10/21, 9:47 PM
Cliffhanger?! Nooooooooooo I can't wait for Mac to wake up. It is the perfect persona for him,I would have done the same. And we'll get Eli and Erik soon,I can't wait. Take your time...but not too long lol. No really, whatever happens in life you'll get through it๐Ÿ‘ OH,btw I love Emit and Vince getting more lovey-dovey. good

Blackjinx123
10/11/21, 12:14 AM
@ForgottenCradle, so happy you liked it! next chapter will be from Mac's perspective. first time I've done that since chapter 1! i so appreciate the well wishes, thank you! writing all the new dynamics between the characters has been such a joy. I'm happy to hear that you're enjoying them as well :)
3/2/21, 8:47 PM
its unfortunate but the story stopped really being interesting for me the second emit shaved all his body hair. it's a shame cause you're an incredible writer, I'll just have to wait for someone to write and actual big sub little dom story that doesn't emasculate the big sub.

10/10/21, 11:48 PM
@Ballbustingkid I wasn't thrilled with the shaving but I was even less thrilled by the cross-dressing. I know I'm late to the party here but given all the praise this series has received I hope I'm not walking into an emasculation fetish story. Just not interested in it. It feels like this is the last place on the internet to read erotica that *isn't* about sissification. That being said the author is a great writer, and it's easy to see why these stories are so popular.

Blackjinx123
10/10/21, 11:55 PM
@amul, the only one in the family that will be sissified is Eli, as it ties into the 'eye for an eye' aspect of the plot. i don't know if you would qualify Emit being turned into a total bottom slut as emasculation or not. i don't plan to to have him cross dress anymore, as Eli will take on that roll. thank you so much for the compliment on the quality of the writing. i really appreciate it!

10/11/21, 12:09 AM
@Blackjinx123 Yeah, I was kinda afraid it was going to go that direction. Just not my thing, I'm afraid. You are an excellent writer and should write about whatever kinks you wish too. I think the best thing I can do as a respectful reader is tap out.

Blackjinx123
10/11/21, 12:12 AM
@amul, absolutely no worries! thank you so much for your kindness and feedback, i really appreciate it. happy reading! :)
10/10/21, 9:11 PM
What a writer.... Amazing

Blackjinx123
10/11/21, 12:08 AM
@BossyRay, thank you so much! :)
10/10/21, 3:29 PM
Once more my joy is indescribable! so when we went through the introductory reprogramming dialog with Uncle Mac, I (wondered if Vince had used that exact wording with his brothers, went back and read through chapter 7, and) realized that both Eli and Erik totally already have the same failsafe in place. So even if Eli learns Erik's control phrase, it SHOULDN'T work, but it would be a fun conversation when he tries to use it on Erik and it totally fizzles. Darn it, it would have been a fun hijinx. but even so, if Eli tries to use it and Vince catches wind of that, it's going to mean that his middle brother needs some extra special punishment. Now that's just delicious to think about! Not getting to see the active implementation of Mac's new vince-approved persona was a small bummer, but that just means more to look forward to! The groundwork for Mac's new personality is so excellently done. 17's a bit legally squirrelly, but since nothing actually happened both in and out of false memories, yay. I can't wait to see Mac start messaging Vince with sweet/awkward "miss you" emojis and sending picture after picture of dumb sweet stuff like "Would this tie look better around my brother's wrists or my neck, Vince-love? Or this Tie?" "Lets do an at home dinner date! You can make your brothers cook and serve us while my brother stays under the table." Speaking of Emit i LOVE his dynamic with Vince. He is constantly living his life half in lust, half in love with his son and it throws Vince off so nicely! the fact that not even drilling a new depth into his dad didn't cool his lust for his uncle but actual human affection and parental love did the trick WORKS for me and keeps me liking vince. Loving this story, and hope life treats you like a favored crown prince so that you may have ample time and space needed to write more at your leisure.

Blackjinx123
10/11/21, 12:07 AM
@Mind Labyrinth, yet another big and beautiful comment. thank you so much! :D when it comes to Eli fucking up and earning extra punishment, i wouldn't worry. i have plenty planned for both brothers in that regard. i confess, I'm so looking forward to writing Mac's new personality! finally getting to write out his indoctrination was a real treat. you can expect some interesting scenarios involving all the Kingston's in the future, thats for sure. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! sorry to leave you off on a cliffhanger, but i have to keep you guys coming back for more somehow ;)
10/10/21, 10:04 PM
Loved it up to this point. Just not into cross-dressing.

Blackjinx123
10/10/21, 10:11 PM
@amul, i understand. if you would like to read the chapters without any cross dressing skip the next and chapter 14. if not, thank you for reading this far!

10/10/21, 10:18 PM
@Blackjinx123 Great, thanks for letting me know! Glad to hear it's not a major kink in every chapter.

Blackjinx123
10/10/21, 10:21 PM
@amul, your most welcome! please let me know what you think of the other chapters and i hope you enjoy :D
10/10/21, 10:17 PM
Good chapter, very hot. Looking forward to seeing what Ruby has planned.
10/8/21, 9:34 PM
You may want to research spanking because there are parts you can't hit without doing permanent and sometimes internal damage. It also is less believable one person is doing all this even without restraints on the victim. Adding restraints consistently or rope or another pup might be best.

10/8/21, 9:51 PM
@Astradei This story isn't particularly plausible, but I think it's just supposed to be hot, not realistic. I dunno, I do think it's hot anyway. My only quibble is that when the cop is restrained to the table it seemed like he was simultaneously bound stomach down and back down as the action moved between various things. I had difficulty picturing what was happening because the positioning/bondage didn't seem to make sense to me. That being said, I was really hoping the cop wound up in diapers like the omega pup but maybe that's a bridge too far for this hapless victim.

10/9/21, 6:35 AM
I know how spanking works. I try not to say where or what is happening specifically so people can fill it in in their own imagination. And he was restrained for the first set. The second set he was being held down by Titan who is meant to be much larger and strong then him. @Astradei

10/9/21, 6:36 AM
Yea I realize now that I could have been a touch more specific with his position. My apologies. @amul

10/10/21, 9:21 PM
I get that. I just think having another pup help or being handcuffed behind his back the whole time would be better. No matter how strong that's a lot of rapid fire things he does one handed while holding someone down even if it doesn't seem he resists much when he could. You tried using muscle relaxer next chapter but it doesn't work right for the story and he also almost got bitten. Restraints and an Oring or Spider gag under the hood would probably work best. @Alpha Artemis
10/10/21, 8:46 PM
The sex demon option is the most interesting to me
Oct 10, 2021
10/10/21, 5:37 PM
This is a really fascinating insight into both BDSM practices and into what happens in places like Hampstead Heath. A very fitting story to be one of the first dedicated stories posted to GayCollarStories.