I like that story! Very hot. I really wonder why nifty wouldn't publish it. Well, their loss!

I like this story. I am dreaming that I am this boy! Can't wait to read the next chapter on what happens at the boy fair. :)

Damn! Your story is soooo HOT! Your descriptive writing has me in the room, watching a naked muscled blond Officer O'Connor restrained and on the verge of greatness! More please and soon! You got this!

Whit and Sid are incredibly hot, but mean as fuck and scary. I got a chuckle at the thought of either of them showing up to work as a 500 lbs. hulk - I don't think that's going to fly! I wonder whether Sid will leave Whit as an emaciated zombie or absorb him completely the way Whit was planning to do to him. Of course I feel sorry for their victims, Bobby in particular. Jimmy, well. Jimmy needs to *do something*. Of course this chapter was about Sid and Whit, but so far Jimmy has really just been acted upon. As a protagonist, he's coming off like the Twilight girl. That's assuming he's meant to be the protagonist! Maybe this story is about Sid and Whit - the story did start with Whit after all.

Seems to me that the dean needs to be added to the notebook.

A great new chapter and it is super hot as usual!!!! Love the way you write! Pushes so many of my buttons! 🔥 🔥 🔥

This was a really good read!!! Well done!

werewolf pls

Option 2 pleaseeee ;)

There's a lot of feedback I need to put together but I'll have to edit it in over the day because I've been tired. To start though, it's quite clear he'd fit into a police community so feeling ostracized is unlikely. Police act like him though we know very little of how he treats others socially, his behavior is pretty on par for American police, though the initial confrontation likely would have had a gun aimed at the pups if they weren't putting their paws against the wall to be searched and likely would have had him request back up as well. Since Bright was toxic and Ruby was abusive those two can't be the good cop psychologically, as we determine our impressions of people within about 2 minutes typically. It's difficult to say honestly what Titan would be seen as because the officer consciously knows he's the ring leader of this gang of homosexuals in his mind and they couldn't abuse him or degrade him without permission. So can Titan portray himself not as the stern captor allowing the abuse? Not unless he visibly punishes the others for their abuse. That could lead to a different presentation perhaps. The idea of punishing others to manipulate the officer while only punishing them solely for that purpose is an interesting one. I'm actually a bit disappointed we haven't actually seen much actual pup play going on in the story either. It feels more like a label just meaning dog masks and toys and a hierarchy. There doesn't feel like a real canine roleplay with headspace is going on. Everyone acts human too. As an aside I'll point out you don't actually shame a dog having an accident. If within two minutes some argue 30 seconds you can just take them outside or to a pad to teach them. Shame and pushing them in the spot or degradation actually harms canine development. I'll re read it later to comment on some of the physical such as the purple and black bruising which shows internal damage. Its going a different way than I expected when I started reading from the first chapter. Curious how you'll lead it to its conclusion.