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10/13/21, 5:24 AM
An interesting plot twist.

10/13/21, 5:29 AM
@Cutlerfan as long as you don't call me M. Night Ramalamadingdong, we're good. 😂

10/13/21, 6:25 PM
@Uncle Arctos No, I like a bit of a twist but nothing as extreme as M. Night's work.
10/13/21, 6:14 PM
I was indulging in a short self-edging session this morning, but this chapter made me cum hard unwillingly. So… Well done, dear writer.
Oct 11, 2021
Martin
10/12/21, 8:13 PM
I like that story! Very hot. I really wonder why nifty wouldn't publish it. Well, their loss!

10/13/21, 3:16 PM
Hey, @Martin! Thanks for the comment. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Oct 11, 2021
10/11/21, 8:46 PM
I like this story. I am dreaming that I am this boy! Can't wait to read the next chapter on what happens at the boy fair. :)

10/13/21, 3:15 PM
@monkeyhimbo Don't we all wish we were him? Hehehe I don't really plan on writing a sequel, but I have a few other ideas I want to explore! Also, I forgot to add to the header of the story, people are free to adapt and republish it as long as they link to the original source and attribute the original authorship. Maybe you could think of a sequel too :)
10/13/21, 3:08 AM
Damn! Your story is soooo HOT! Your descriptive writing has me in the room, watching a naked muscled blond Officer O'Connor restrained and on the verge of greatness! More please and soon! You got this!

10/13/21, 10:17 AM
@MuscleSon69 I'm glad you enjoyed the back half of the story. The second half is well underway, unfortunately I'm a bit slow at writing and have limited writing time but I am chugging away at this. The second half of the story will leave O'Connor and Gutierrez transition to muscle cows resolved but will set this little world I'm building up for possible future episodes. However, after I do finish this story I'm going to spend some time working with other concepts I've been cooking up. I truly appreciate the support and praise.
10/13/21, 1:50 AM
Whit and Sid are incredibly hot, but mean as fuck and scary. I got a chuckle at the thought of either of them showing up to work as a 500 lbs. hulk - I don't think that's going to fly! I wonder whether Sid will leave Whit as an emaciated zombie or absorb him completely the way Whit was planning to do to him. Of course I feel sorry for their victims, Bobby in particular. Jimmy, well. Jimmy needs to *do something*. Of course this chapter was about Sid and Whit, but so far Jimmy has really just been acted upon. As a protagonist, he's coming off like the Twilight girl. That's assuming he's meant to be the protagonist! Maybe this story is about Sid and Whit - the story did start with Whit after all.

10/13/21, 5:16 AM
@amul Ass to a 500 lb Whit and going to work, well when you're high on that muscle growth you don't think about reality even if you should. Let's just say the medallion is fulfilling their desires and maybe the rush of getting everything you want has them a little addled. How many bad decisions are made when you're high on something because you thought it was a good idea at the time? Fear not gentle readers all will be revealed.

10/13/21, 10:01 AM
@Uncle Arctos Well yeah, I probably would offer my ass to a 500 lbs. Whit. I'm only human, after all. ;-) Can't wait to see what happens next!
10/13/21, 5:43 AM
Seems to me that the dean needs to be added to the notebook.
Ben
10/13/21, 4:52 AM
A great new chapter and it is super hot as usual!!!! Love the way you write! Pushes so many of my buttons! 🔥 🔥 🔥
Dec 29, 2020
10/13/21, 3:18 AM
This was a really good read!!! Well done!
Alex Lat
10/13/21, 2:40 AM
werewolf pls