@amul Thanks for your comment! Some of them most definetly play dirty haha.

Very hot! I don't even really have a foot fetish but the way you described those kinky soccer players I think I'd have had to do the foot licking challenge one-handed.

Poor Hayden! Bunch of cheaters in this game. I hope the people running the game stick to their promise to eventually free the losers.

So Skippy still has a bit of fight in him. I'm personally hoping he winds up as a permanent diaper pup but I'm happy to stick around and find out.

I love the diaper humiliation and the concept of using forced diapering to break down Christian's resistance and force him to dig into his obvious past trauma that is informing his homophobia. Parts of this chapter were also very sweet and almost romantic. Totally enjoyed it.

This is a beautifully written story. I cannot wait to see where it goes. Thanks for taking the time and effort to write it!

I once had shoulder length hair. But back then I had not yet a dom to shave it for meow. It would be so nice to have someone vibrate meow to shaving. The rhythmic bliss would be amazing. You are making it difficult for meow to endure this locktober. Chains, piercings and tatts, hawtttt

Dom bottom creating Submissive tops! OOooooo! To sell! I'm straining a in my cage and the precum passes through my underwear and made a spot on my jeans.

Hmmm. Since the story is more transitioning to something a bit different and I've already kinda pointed out some criticism you thought was too harsh earlier, I'll just give some suggestions this time on things that could help strengthen your current pathway of plot development in the story without changing it. 1. Since you're going a bit into hypnosis to explain the cracks in the story, there's no real need to be frugal with it. Whether it's musk control from the cinnamon or unmentioned things later explained, push more into the mind scrambling mechanic. He could even be a werewolf or supernatural being if you like. 2. Instead of acting like its inevitable he'll keep fighting, if you're going the approach of a more mind affect kind of deus ex machina, then let the officer lose completely already. Then use bondage toys, plugs, and restraints (I don't think his paws were unlocked yet actually as a reminder) to keep the teasing going, keep the ban on speech, and give him an aphrodisiac to make him confused on his horniness. Regardless if the interest is to keep writing about abusing him or not, you can justify it as him wanting it for unexplainable reasons and seeking it out. Could culminate it with an inner monologue fight inside the officers mind. The BDSM aspect could help lessen the cruelty that some of the characters have presented so it feels both parties feel pleasure at least. 3. If instead the goal is more the diaper humiliation then constantly giving him laxatives and making him drink a lot to keep peeing and excreting several times each day. This could be used to combine with regressing his body from all the muscle loss and such. Finally as an aside I think it'll benefit your story since you keep alluding to it, to introduce either the other diaper pup or one of the other pups (or all) as a prior project of Titan to kind of highlight what his future has awaiting for him and what they used to be like. This could help make it feel more like he is more of a mysterious person who's been doing this for a long time. A slight conversation with the anonymous person at the station of why this is happening or a progress report could add some intrigue too, maybe even while the officer is using some lube or his saliva to masturbate Titan, showing he's completely unaware of his surroundings due to a mental affect. Trigger words arent a bad thing to introduce to the pack mechanisms. Don't forget to rehood the officer, btw. Curious to see how it develops.

Option 1. Will be fun to see what the frat bros do in this based upon their experiences in the past games. Given how Greg got somewhat of what he wanted and can get more into his ideal body by doing this. And how frequently Prideful Trevor gets fucked into submission, just seeing his reactions to being constantly emasculated and disrespected is fun. Doesn't even have to be substantial him just saying "No! You will respect my Authoritaeee" as he gets fucked by a transformed frat boy in the background of a scene is a nice thought. **This is the one that has my vote.** Option 2: Has a chance to just be a fun time, ESPECIALLY with the random permanent trick effect. Option 3: Demons are fun in these stories. Especially if someone like Dan makes a deal to get a fully functional pussy and how that could affect the game and his life. Or Trevor making a deal to get a temporary nub and then get emasculated by one large rod demon, or if a Demon Trevor thinks he can control outsmarts him and permanently or temporarily takes something from him, ect. A fun time all around.