Recent Comments

10/19/21, 4:29 PM
As per above, I'd say mildy annoying and then some. Good chapter. I felt empathy for Vanhella and glad to see him moving along. I loved how he pushed back to take the tail. Good pup! I can't wait to find out what his name is going to be.
Conversion Enthusiast
10/19/21, 4:43 AM
I'm intrigued by the snake scales! it seems like rejection of the light automatically makes one an enemy of the pharaoh although i also cant tell if he just imagined it. i suppose ill have to wait and see but i liked this chapter! the army grows!
10/19/21, 12:25 AM
You made Bright lose his temper at exactly the right time. As a reader, I had had just enough of Vanhella's attitude. When Bright put his boot on the pig pup's chest and threatened him with neutering for using the Faggot word again, I almost rose from my chair to clap. Beta Bright is not to be trifled with. Vanhella still has rage and hatred. I look forward to the process of him becoming an obedient, compliant and loyal dog. Woof! This chapter was hot. Thank you.
10/18/21, 8:00 PM
I look forward to seeing Vhanella's transformation. His anger and defiance is palpable which leads even more to the desire to watch him submit. Woof!
10/18/21, 1:22 AM
WEREWOLF!!!!
10/18/21, 12:21 AM
I love that the pack is actually trying to fix Skippy/Christian. What could have been a short kinky homophobe/revenge story became something with a lot more depth and commentary about how society produces our own villains.
10/17/21, 11:40 PM
Big fan! of this story! I always felt like fantasy stories were under represented on this site. lad to see it being explored!
Anonymous
10/17/21, 5:07 PM
i love this story so much
Tyrol
10/14/21, 3:21 PM
Vote count at the time i have started writing is 10/12/16 so it's gonna be sex demons! I've already started writing what types of contracts each demon is going to make the boys sign.

easdf
10/15/21, 10:26 PM
@Tyrol Maybe one of them can suggests out from the curse, but with a price extremely lie or it will turn out to be a trick

easdf
10/16/21, 8:41 PM
@easdf I wrote this last comment when I was dead tired to the point I barely remember writing it, and now that I've read the full explanation I feel silly about what I wrote...

easdf
10/17/21, 8:47 AM
@Tyrol Neither do I... Neither I...
10/17/21, 6:00 AM
You evoked the smell, feel, and taste of everything so vividly I almost felt as if I were living it!