Recent Comments

Kods
11/4/21, 5:29 AM
This was a great 2nd chapter! love the mpreg and cum mind control. Can't wait to see what happens next!
11/3/21, 6:20 PM
this has got to be the best story i've read all year. dont stop now! cant wait to see what else Whit has in store
11/3/21, 5:53 PM
I knew I was gonna be disappointed. Matt should have gotten out of there
boi98229
2/19/20, 9:01 AM
Good start; looking forward to the continuation.

Anonymous
11/3/21, 5:39 PM
Just responding to my earlier comment from a year and a half ago! Not just a good start as i had originally said -- it's a great start! So so hot! My only negative comment is that you haven't added another chapter yet!! i feel like Terry now -- all tied up in knots and edged to the point of exploding, and you just took your hand off my dick!! Please, Sir, more! Please, Sir, i need more!
11/2/21, 6:38 AM
Really good story! Hope to see more!
11/2/21, 6:14 AM
This is a work of art. Hot, compelling, wonderfully written.
Anonymous
10/31/21, 9:04 PM
This story is fantastic! Can't wait to see what happens next with Carl & Matt!
10/31/21, 7:47 AM
I know this isnt usually your style, but im hoping Matt gets fixed. I feel too bad for Matt now

Gasuda
10/31/21, 11:03 AM
@HughTF I'm hoping he and Carl split the difference and end up somewhere between man and pig by the end.

10/31/21, 3:46 PM
@Gasuda or maybe the roles can reverse. I know its just gainer fic, but that could've been foreshadowed by Matt saying "you deserve to be like this." but maybe that's just me. If I'm being honest, at this point stories just keep being the same thing. I might as well just read the same story and just swap out the names.

10/31/21, 5:22 PM
@HughTF As is usually the case when folks give me notes like this, like a lot of the stuff I write, this was a commission, so what happens to the characters is what was requested by the commissioner. But yeah, Carl's a total asshole, you're not wrong! If the problem is that you just don't like what happens in my stories then...don't read them? I write what I like, and folks pay me to write what they want because they like my style and my characterization. If it's not your thing, then it's not your thing! You can always pay me to write something else!
10/31/21, 3:46 PM
I hope Matt follows through and dumps Carl, what an asshole!
10/31/21, 2:26 PM
This was hot throughout the whole thing! I’m worried about Felix and Trevor but I hope they end up happy together.