Recent Comments

11/6/21, 8:03 PM
Wonderful descriptions of growth. Glad karma finally got around to someone.

11/7/21, 1:35 AM
@Cutlerfan Oh karma was just waiting for Whit to just push it too far. Trust me, I haven't changed ANYTHING in this story due to comments, though I do appreciate them SO very much. The story is coming together as I had envisioned from the start. I think you'll like where it's going to end. Karma and the amulet ain't done with anyone yet.

11/7/21, 3:02 PM
@Uncle Arctos Awesome! [Yeah I was a kid in the 80s, lol]

11/7/21, 3:49 PM
@Cutlerfan so was I! Awesome dates me. 🐻😁
Ben
11/7/21, 6:53 AM
Very 🔥! Loved it!
Anonymous
11/7/21, 2:35 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!!!
11/5/21, 10:27 AM
Glad to see Jimmy become an active character again! Whit's ongoing transformations have been and are incredible.

11/7/21, 1:32 AM
@amul Jimmy was never out of the picture, but sometimes you have to let other actors have center stage for awhile... so they can get enough rope with which to hang themselves.
Annon
11/5/21, 2:41 AM
yup. loved this. more immobile stories! I'll be adding some myself but damn i wanna see more from you too haha : tight stories

11/7/21, 1:31 AM
@Annon I thought Whit deserved to discover what greed gets you the hard way.
Zac
11/7/21, 12:21 AM
HOT!
11/6/21, 9:53 PM
great story !
Jun 24, 2013
boi98229
11/6/21, 5:10 PM
Given my mind control, hypnosis, enslavement, and hair fetishes, this story fit me to a tee! It couldn't have been hotter! That said, your imagination and writing skills made it all happen! My only suggestion which could make the story better, again per my own preference, would be to make it longer. Thanks for a great story!
11/6/21, 1:57 AM
Love love love this idea. So much fun to do a reality competition format. It's a really good mixture of eroticism and light-hearted humour/entertainment with the competition. Well done!
Anonymous
11/5/21, 11:01 PM
I like this 2nd version ending a lot! Very hot!