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boi98229
11/14/21, 5:37 AM
I've loved this story from the beginning. The implied recognition that there may be so many levels of mind control/training that involve all parts of who we are is really arousing. (I would love to know more about the real science of mind control/training.) The slave who has been testing and experiencing the machine for some time is disturbed in the middle of this chapter's session. He is suddenly concerned about losing his Master as his mind too is enslaved. Will his Master continue to be the same dominant person if he becomes a slave to the machine? While he is happy to share the joy and pleasure he experiences, he does not want to lose his Master. I thought that perspective, which of course the machine anticipated and controlled, was a thrilling new wrinkle to the story. In this case I mean 'thrilling' in both the sense of imagined erotic pleasure and in a Stephen King sense of extreme concern and a spark of fear about how far this enslavement process will go. This wrinkle throws a whole new question about trust in a D/s relationship. Thinking back to the beginning of the story, I don't recall that we yet know much at all about the persons/organization that has developed this machine in the first place. Still one of my very favorite stories!! Thanks so much!

11/14/21, 2:35 PM
@boi98229 I so appreciate you taking the time to respond to this story! It's really encouraging and helps me write more ^^! I know a fair bit about hypnosis and behavioural training, and about false memories and things like that -- the human mind is amazing in its capacity for flexibility. One of my favourite moods in erotica is definitely that slight edge of fear, forbiddenness or uncertainty to lend a bit of conflict to the story. I like it when characters know on some level that things might turn out badly for them but that they're so aroused and into it that they can't bring themselves to care, or can't quite escape. (Of course, in IRL D/s, I like being able to trust my Dom pretty well completely, which is totally different). I made the choice not to say too much about the sinister orgs/people building these mind control machines to keep the focus on the experience of this one character, but I suspect their goal is mass mind control ^^. It's really nice to hear that this is one of your favourite stories! <3
11/14/21, 12:34 AM
@Henry Wolf Thanks! I loved doing the competition format. I enjoy those kind of shows in real life. If only this kind of show existed for real XD
11/11/21, 10:15 AM
This is one of the best in a while! I hope you continue writing! the reversal and the humiliation was so good i wished you had slowed it down and really shown us how much he struggled with the roles reversing. big fan already!
boi98229
11/11/21, 3:48 AM
Perfect, except that it was so hot, i just wanted it to go on and on. Still, it's a new favorite for me.
11/10/21, 3:08 AM
Nice simple story, very hot. Loved the turn around.
11/9/21, 6:14 PM
I'm curious does this story not show up at all in your feeds when going back through to find it? I went back more then a month and it didn't show up once I had to actually search for it and I don't have anything turned off so not sure why I can't see it.
11/6/21, 8:03 PM
Wonderful descriptions of growth. Glad karma finally got around to someone.

11/7/21, 1:35 AM
@Cutlerfan Oh karma was just waiting for Whit to just push it too far. Trust me, I haven't changed ANYTHING in this story due to comments, though I do appreciate them SO very much. The story is coming together as I had envisioned from the start. I think you'll like where it's going to end. Karma and the amulet ain't done with anyone yet.

11/7/21, 3:02 PM
@Uncle Arctos Awesome! [Yeah I was a kid in the 80s, lol]

11/7/21, 3:49 PM
@Cutlerfan so was I! Awesome dates me. 🐻😁
Ben
11/7/21, 6:53 AM
Very 🔥! Loved it!
Anonymous
11/7/21, 2:35 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!!!
11/5/21, 10:27 AM
Glad to see Jimmy become an active character again! Whit's ongoing transformations have been and are incredible.

11/7/21, 1:32 AM
@amul Jimmy was never out of the picture, but sometimes you have to let other actors have center stage for awhile... so they can get enough rope with which to hang themselves.