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Ben
11/20/21, 7:33 AM
Another hot chapter!! Love it!!
Jonathan
11/19/21, 10:46 PM
loving this story! Can't wait for the next chapter

Dylan
11/19/21, 11:43 PM
@Jonathan Thx Jonathan, im working on it! Greets Dylan
11/19/21, 7:47 PM
Overjoyed to hear you are working on a sequel.

11/19/21, 8:27 PM
@Beaner Aww, thanks! I hope I can get a draft out soon.
11/19/21, 7:52 PM
so do I
11/19/21, 6:31 PM
Fantastic fiction as ever

Dylan
11/19/21, 6:44 PM
@incaerau Thk u Sir
boi98229
11/19/21, 9:21 AM
Adventurous and wonderfully sensuous! Magical! Definitely my kind of faery tale. Thank you so much!

11/19/21, 3:49 PM
@boi98229 I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'm actually working on a sequel to this story right now ^^!
Dylan
11/19/21, 8:38 AM
Thank you Sir, as a message from the site owner is a true honor! I am new to this site , so i really appreciate any feedback to improve my writing skills. Any suggestions to the plot would be welcome as well, i gladly try to fullfil anyones wishes, as far as i can ! Greets, Dylan
Aaron
11/18/21, 4:12 PM
I found this story to be good at parts but other times it fell short. Many of the things said were not commands they were suggestions or musings like "And i know you want to" there is nothing to stop Mark from leaving the house, jumping on a plane and hiding out for a week. Knowing what is now in store for him there is 0 reason he wouldn't take that opportunity seeing as he is clearly super rich. Some of the sex content was great while other parts were brief and it honestly would have been better if those ones were left out. Its not a bad story it just seems like it was written with your dick in one hand not planning it out before hand. I'll be interested to see where the next chapter goes

11/19/21, 3:57 AM
@Aaron Mark was in fact ordered to wait for Terry to bring his next master to him. Going with what the stated effects of the drug are in the story, he would be forced to comply with that for at least a week - and Terry promised to return within 5 days.
Martin
11/19/21, 3:07 AM
This series has become a bit of a guilty pleasure for me. Revolting and very hot at the same time. Thank god it's only a fantasy, and a hot one at that!
11/19/21, 12:17 AM
Great job! Very hot with the BDSM elements and also going into the psyche of the characters. You've got the start of something quite interesting here. Looking forward to seeing where you go with it. Tiny side note: maybe do a once-over before posting. Few misspellings and wrong words used but nothing a quick proofread can't fix! Well done! :)