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12/26/21, 6:01 PM
This is hot, and fresh, and new, and unlike anything I've read here before. I've loved your stuff for a long time, but this is fucking great!

12/27/21, 4:13 AM
Thanks @PTutius27! I actually had to create the ‘smarter’ tag for this one, but did so with Martin’s blessing.
12/26/21, 5:17 PM
Man! You nailed this! It's all been said above, but we loved you starting where you normally end (sweet, fun, content, gay muscle bro with supportive friends) but then making him smart. we all thought "No, don't do that to him Derek", but the depth of the human condition you explore is a new level here. I was gutted when he couldn't change reality, but quickly loved the direction he had to take. The mental changes. What a master piece. Give it a few years and this may well replace our favourite Derek Williams story. Plus 3 was my favourite and was almost beaten by your series around the town. I'll be re-reading this a few more times, but it truly is brilliance at so many levels! Thanks

12/27/21, 4:13 AM
Thanks @Lusty Stallion! I had fun playing with the formula here and I’m stoked where it went.
12/26/21, 9:14 PM
Without a doubt, this is the best story I've encountered here, both from the standpoint of porn/wanking material, and from the standpoint of literary merit. This story SINGS. See if you can get the cock cage to change the New Yorker's submission policy so they would judge erotic stories on the same bases as other short stories they publish.

12/26/21, 9:32 PM
@Lohengrin This very well may be the highest praise I have ever gotten.
John
12/26/21, 9:04 PM
Can't wait for the next part!
12/26/21, 6:12 PM
I love it! You've really captured the casual cruelty so well
1/16/21, 7:25 AM
Fuck this is so hot please please write more please!!!!!!!

12/26/21, 5:55 PM
FUCK YEAH I"M SO EXCITED @Gayteenfag
12/25/21, 9:05 PM
such a hot story! definitely hope this continues (would love to see if aeron and xander end up brothers), or that we get to see daddy bear change other men!

12/26/21, 6:01 AM
@italianstalian1987 Thank you for the feedback! I don't know yet but maybe!
12/25/21, 5:43 PM
Oh hell yeah this was awesome. super sexy. Where can I get some straight ass?

SC Walker
12/25/21, 7:18 PM
Guess you'll have to visit Donkey Cakes :) I heard their new cakes are *amazing* ;) @Heru Kane

12/26/21, 12:38 AM
@SC Walker oh man I can imagine how fun that would be. Also I hope he finds other dumb jocks to seduce into happy needy bottoms.
12/25/21, 11:57 PM
This series has been and continues to be really hot.
12/25/21, 8:23 PM
Will there be more? This was so hot 😍

SC Walker
12/25/21, 9:13 PM
Yes! Chapter 2 is 80% done :D @sexydance10sp

12/25/21, 11:51 PM
Can't wait then ;) @SC Walker