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Anonymous
12/28/21, 11:34 AM
Absolutely amazing!

12/28/21, 1:03 PM
Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it.
12/28/21, 3:57 AM
You did a great job!
12/27/21, 6:25 AM
An excellent story! A much more kind rendering of the transformations into muscle cows and bulls.

12/27/21, 9:59 PM
@Cutlerfan Thanks, Cutler. I'm glad you appreciated that aspect of the story. I tried to keep it kinky but make it a bit less dark, because that's my preference as well.
Yourguy92
12/27/21, 8:20 AM
I love the story and can't wait to see how JD and most likely his cousin continues to develop. Sometimes the story seems to push forward too quickly and we can't get enough of his feelings and thoughts. Not a bad thing but something you may consider for future stories 😊
12/26/21, 6:01 PM
This is hot, and fresh, and new, and unlike anything I've read here before. I've loved your stuff for a long time, but this is fucking great!

12/27/21, 4:13 AM
Thanks @PTutius27! I actually had to create the ‘smarter’ tag for this one, but did so with Martin’s blessing.
12/26/21, 5:17 PM
Man! You nailed this! It's all been said above, but we loved you starting where you normally end (sweet, fun, content, gay muscle bro with supportive friends) but then making him smart. we all thought "No, don't do that to him Derek", but the depth of the human condition you explore is a new level here. I was gutted when he couldn't change reality, but quickly loved the direction he had to take. The mental changes. What a master piece. Give it a few years and this may well replace our favourite Derek Williams story. Plus 3 was my favourite and was almost beaten by your series around the town. I'll be re-reading this a few more times, but it truly is brilliance at so many levels! Thanks

12/27/21, 4:13 AM
Thanks @Lusty Stallion! I had fun playing with the formula here and I’m stoked where it went.
12/26/21, 9:14 PM
Without a doubt, this is the best story I've encountered here, both from the standpoint of porn/wanking material, and from the standpoint of literary merit. This story SINGS. See if you can get the cock cage to change the New Yorker's submission policy so they would judge erotic stories on the same bases as other short stories they publish.

12/26/21, 9:32 PM
@Lohengrin This very well may be the highest praise I have ever gotten.
John
12/26/21, 9:04 PM
Can't wait for the next part!
12/26/21, 6:12 PM
I love it! You've really captured the casual cruelty so well
1/16/21, 7:25 AM
Fuck this is so hot please please write more please!!!!!!!

12/26/21, 5:55 PM
FUCK YEAH I"M SO EXCITED @Gayteenfag