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boi98229
1/12/22, 7:07 AM
My muscle got hard just by reading this chapter. Getting hotter. Gotta go...
boi98229
1/12/22, 6:57 AM
Good start for what looks like a fun ride! Chat later; need to read on right now. ;))
1/12/22, 3:35 AM
Yeah, gonna love spending time reading this one

Tight Stories
1/12/22, 4:25 AM
@S1lv3r Oh bro! Proper glad to hear it mate!
1/12/22, 2:51 AM
This is such a fantastic series! I am really excited to read more!
Anonymous
1/11/22, 8:39 PM
absolutely loved this one, such a hot and sweet fairy tale!

1/11/22, 10:31 PM
@Anonymous I'm so glad to hear it and appreciate you taking the time to say so! Comments are author fuel ✨!
Martin
1/11/22, 9:16 PM
@darkfantasy It's difficult to judge this story in such an early stage. The premise is certainly interesting. Remember: The readers usually want to read this to get off, we're all peeping toms turned on by whatever weird and kinky fantasies you put your characters through. So, I'm curious what you're going to come up with in your further chapters!
1/11/22, 10:28 AM
Did you read a lot of the Myth Adventures books by Robert Aspirin? I love so much in both of the stories in this series, Unfortunately, this one ends with the sense that you still had much you wanted to explore, but thought you had let it go on for too long leaving so much fruit on the vine. I actually wish you had let this chapter end at Spurling's Folly and picked up with the same intensity the next part of the quest in a part 3. I also kept thinking this need to be developed into comic like Myth Adventures or Elf Quest.

1/11/22, 12:10 PM
Hey @scudder ! I totally grew up with battered paperback copies of Another Fine Myth and other entries into that series in the house, and I'm flattered by the comparison! I love those books. I guess poor Chance has become Gleep in this situation, motivated by sex rather than food ^^. Thank you for the comment! I totally hear you -- I've been aiming to write and share these past few years to get some perspective on my work, so this is very helpful. I hope to one day rework the series, and I definitely think I could stand to stick with and detail the later parts of the story if that happens! Comments like this are what make me want to. Much appreciated!