Recent Comments

10/3/25, 9:42 PM
Sean bienvenidos a la zona de comentarios, en esta ocasión Axel estará siendo el buzón con el que podrán poner todos sus comentarios. Esta vez será algo diferente, no serán cartas sino mensajes de texto, para que cada comentario que llegue haga vibrar ese celular bien metido en su culo, comenzando con este comentario. "Umm~ por favor me van ha hacer correrme" Nota: sin importar que haya pasado tiempo desde que publique los capítulos anteriores me gustaría saber su opinión y comentarios, muchas gracias.
10/3/25, 2:58 PM
This is really one of the most creative stories I've read on this site. It's hot, it's funny and it tells the story in a way that is very uncommon and hard to pull off. I keep coming back to this story because it's just so excellently executed and makes me wonder where I can get a roommate like that. Very very well done!
9/30/25, 3:00 AM
You have Chapter 4 listed twice. I think the chapters made it feel a bit disjointed so maybe just remove them?

Jai
10/3/25, 12:42 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Good call! Love your work, thanks for the tip!

10/3/25, 12:22 PM
@[Jai](/user/show/692615) Thank you. I try to be supportive of others best I can.
9/22/25, 1:20 PM
Interest? Yes! Please continue.

Jai
10/3/25, 12:42 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) On it! :)
Jul 26, 2025
10/2/25, 7:55 PM
Oh woooow this hit so many of my buttons! Extremely hot stuff. And they’re so cute together!
10/2/25, 11:44 AM
Amazing story! :) I just wish there was slightly more between the uncertain amount of time to show the resistance being beat down and the brainwashing taking over.
10/1/25, 11:19 AM
This is freaking great!! The fucking and the submission is fantastic. Yates fighting to control himself and master these new mysterious powers and be a good man is fantastic. And his war of wills and wits with Erame is excellent. Boy oh boy do I want to read more of this!! And maybe Yates will grow some kinks beyond pure sex since Max and Trent are so into it. 😏

10/2/25, 3:57 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Oh yes, Max, and Trent, will be showing Yates and Declyn the ropes, to all of their enjoyment as he learns what it means to own three other men.
10/1/25, 10:51 AM
So hot rereading this!!

10/2/25, 3:46 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) thank you. I hope you keep enjoying it.
May 1, 2024
8/27/24, 1:19 PM
Hopefully, someone will continue this, because this is very well written, and there is a lot that could be done to expand on the loose threads.
9/30/25, 2:47 PM
Goodness me haha get these manlings seeded!! 😂. Great chapter.