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1/21/22, 5:20 PM
Not a writer? This was excellent. I hope you can continue.
1/21/22, 9:11 AM
Happy to see that this series is continuing. I'm hooked.
Little Slave Bobby
1/21/22, 5:42 AM
Thank you Sir for the Story. I enjoyed reading every chapter. I hope Skippy remains a diapered pup.
Anonymous
1/21/22, 1:21 AM

1/21/22, 1:45 AM
I will do my best! Putting myself in the mindset of a straight dude being turned gay and kinky is a bit of a struggle for me hahaha. But ill try my best! @Plymouth58
1/21/22, 1:37 AM
Yes! I'm glad to see you're posting on this series again. It's a favorite of mine.
1/20/22, 6:37 PM
While the story itself is simple, I like the expertly crafted the way it jumps in time to reveal information not before it is needed. It does a lot of world building without explicitly telling us everything, just welcomes us to accept this reality and enjoy a slice of it. And I always enjoy a good dom-bottom story.

1/21/22, 1:29 AM
This is super helpful for me! Knowing that this is something I did well will help me focus on improving it in the future. I think I started to comprehend this after chapter 5 of P&FB thanks to a comment by time.to.occur. It’ll definitely be a part of my next editing pass for the follow-up to this story. @Josh Slater
1/20/22, 7:37 PM
I enjoyed this one just as much as the truck driver story. You're really good at this, I hope you are able to finish another story and share it with us!
12/3/21, 10:47 PM
I thought almost everything about this story was wonderful except for the last few lines which were confusing, I couldn't figure out exactly what Mr. E was doing or what the significance was. But aside from that, story is sweet, tender, and hot as hell.

1/20/22, 7:24 PM
Basically it is implying hes about to do something else kinky and weird to another guy. It's a prompt for the next person who wants to write chapter.@amul
1/20/22, 5:51 PM
Well written, second story now for me that has shown me that it is possible to inject a tenderness and variety to sex scenes to try to keep things interesting. I did find the characterisation of "I would *never* loose this much cum..." a bit odd when just sessions earlier he was saying that he was ready to let it all go, not telling his husband that he was close

1/20/22, 6:16 PM
Ooh, I’m really glad that I was able to show you something new in that sense! I’m always trying to make sure that my scenes aren’t just repetitive. I’d like to think that what he thought earlier on was a result of Tobias’s powerful edging, and once Tobias cowed him he became a little more sensible again, but I understand if that rang kind of strangely after all! @A Possession A Day

1/20/22, 6:41 PM
@Soren Fitz Yeah that does make sense, I guess people are rarely going to be fully rational in the middle of a wild sex romp and everything haha. Just a minor thing
1/20/22, 1:26 AM
Well, I tried to pace myself, but couldn't. Read all three chapters of this story almost without pause. Great story! Loved every bit of it. I realize that part of what was so great about it is your humor -- I really love the combination of humor and eroticism. I seem to remember other stories of yours were much more somber and dark. But this one (IMO) is just perfect and hope you will keep adding to it. Love the unintentional exhibitionism (especially of Joe and Frank) and look forward to the fulfillment of the ass action promised for Frank. Thanks for writing/posting this story -- it's made me very happy.