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4/26/22, 1:06 PM
Oh man such a hot story. I think this has to be one of my favorites if not my favorite series from you.. maybe not including the superhero ones cause im biased haha. With Keegan knowing how much Sean loves to be degraded I hope he kicks it up and then some if theres more chapters to come. Also Sean has a model for his face but does Keegan have someone that you think of when writing him? Thanks for the hot story Jack!

4/26/22, 8:19 PM
@AxelCyclone I'll add Keeg next chapter for you :)

4/27/22, 1:40 AM
@Jack Parker Awesome! You already had Logan Foote and he is so hot and a perfect Pick for who Sean could be so I've been curious at who you had in mind for Keegan. I had someone like Haydem Monteleone in mind when reading Keegan so im excited to see who you choose!
4/26/22, 6:51 PM
HEY MATE! Super hot story. I do have a request though....can you put the photos at the bottom? They kinda' fuck with my imagination when I'm creating these guys in my mind. That's why I'm reading the porn instead of looking at it.

Rubber_Lover14
4/26/22, 7:06 PM
@daemon I'm a bit confused by your request. As with all my stories, any photo of a man who is currently playing a significant role, or could possibly play a bigger roll in the future, can be found at the bottom of the story. So I'm not exactly sure why your asking me to add what is already there. Could it perhaps be a formatting issue when it comes to mobile?

Martin
4/26/22, 8:55 PM
@Rubber_Lover14 I guess there's a *"not"* missing in his sentence... Still, noone is forced to look at the images. I might add a feature that hides images for those who don't want to see them.

Rubber_Lover14
4/27/22, 12:29 AM
@Martin Fair enough. I might move them to the top. Or perhaps place a warning. I personally like including images myself. Helps me visualize the story and all that. But I understand its not for everyone. Perhaps a method of designating what the image is? Like if its part of a character, a pose their doing, or some sort of sex toy. Then you could have it to where Only specific things, like character references, are hidden. Idk, just an idea.
4/26/22, 3:24 PM
Damm that school sounds like fun now way better than mine high school anyway
4/25/22, 7:25 PM
Finally in the “read this” club. Yeah. 🤷🏼 It’s exceptional. Your attention to craft makes everything a joy for the eyes (and the mind) to follow. I loved the character dynamic. Finn’s perspective as he starts warming into the wish’s influence was ‘chef’s kiss’ dramatic-irony-done-well.

4/26/22, 2:39 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Thanks so much for reading!
4/26/22, 2:20 PM
JESUS CHRIST Nocturne!! Your usual (high) craft level, but now with a lore-gasm to boot. This is phenomenal work.

4/26/22, 2:33 PM
@The Dirty Spiders Well thanks so much. I’m kind of thinking that this world building that I came up with is going to give it enough impetus to be about the length of a novella. I’m really looking forward to seeing what people think of the third part because I feel like now the story is starting to blend into a more clear direction.
4/8/22, 9:43 PM
This is fascinating, and very hot! I'm excited to see more of it when it's ready!

4/26/22, 2:33 PM
@Dace oops I accidentally didn't reply directly to you before. Thanks much!
4/26/22, 1:21 AM
So good …

4/26/22, 1:26 AM
@Beaner Thanks man!
John
4/24/22, 5:31 PM
could have done without the het stuff but damn I love the way you write otherwise lol.
4/24/22, 5:11 PM
Oh crap! That was incredible.
LeatherBoy
4/17/22, 11:26 PM
OMG this is defintely one of my favourite stories here! i really enjoyed both your writing style and the story, which is sexy af! I really hope you will continue with this and make it a series: i'd love to see how this s/m relation devellopes, also which other fetishes could be included! You got my complete support, also dont worry about texting me if you wanna talk or you need something :)

Rubber_Lover14
4/24/22, 2:42 PM
@LeatherBoy I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this little side story of mine. I'll try and make a part two at some point. However, this is a side story, so it make take me some time. Although, I may start including bondage elements into my main story, if I find the right place for them. The next part of A Jocks Karma should be out within a week, so at least you'll have that to look forward to. And I might take you up on that offer to chat. I have plenty of free time, so just message away ^^