Recent Comments

5/18/25, 4:55 AM
I want to be tranced like this too. So 🔥🔥🔥
Anonymous
5/18/25, 4:58 AM
Damnnn if only it was longer, the story was getting good, keep it going pal!
5/18/25, 7:35 AM
Would be fun to see if the stream is slowly transforming Jay into a new Orc… ready for him to the one to finally break Austin’s last barriers completing both their transformations
5/18/25, 12:25 PM
Nice first story. I write a few on that subject myself. Glad to see others are picking up on it as well. Love to chat with you.

5/19/25, 10:34 PM
@[Cracker](/user/show/10023984) I’ve actually read yours before :) would also love to chat

5/20/25, 12:01 PM
@[cashgodpj](/user/show/10062476) Feel free to email me directly. My email is posted on my stories.
5/18/25, 2:16 PM
god this continues to be such a good story. noah getting liam to taste his pre was so hot. this chapter had hints of a little romance which was fun, and the idea that maybe liam has been gay all along and noah is just bringing it out in him (or maybe noah's manipulation is just so good that liam is gonna feel like that).

lukas pucci
5/18/25, 6:23 PM
@[spookydeer](/user/show/10049746) damn, you’re really tuned in— perceptive af. definitely picking up on some threads that are going to matter more as the story goes on… but I’ll leave it at

5/18/25, 6:40 PM
@[lukas pucci](/user/show/10040865) when a story is this well written its hard to not find the little details! very well done, you'll have a fan in me for as long as you're writing for
5/18/25, 6:18 PM
Sehr gelungene Fortsetzung. Gerne weiter so.
5/18/25, 9:08 PM
bro is the next chp coming?
5/19/25, 12:30 AM
I love this story, and I hope it's the start of a longer series, or at least a miniseries. The scenario, the characters, the description, the dialogues, the costume and the mindfuck are all SO good and promising! I have a thing for cross eyed dumbed-down superheroes, drooling in modified and/or dirty uniforms, so you can imagine how much I enjoyed this story. I see this is your first story here, so welcome to the site! Based on your username and your first story, I can tell I'll be eagerly awaiting more of your work. This story hits the nail on the head with everything I love in a style that I like a lot, so I predict I'll enjoy more of your stories! Best regards!
TDMrk
5/19/25, 3:29 AM
For a first story this has been really great! I’m excited to see where it goes.