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11/21/25, 5:45 AM
Hope this gets updated, I keep re-reading the story almost every week.
11/21/25, 4:16 AM
Can't wait for more
11/21/25, 3:45 AM
It seems interesting, but I'd like more character development, which unfortunately wasn't the case in the first book. Who is Owen? Who is Y? What are their goals? How did this start? Can anyone with some sense of humor stop them? And why do the characters sometimes behave so stupidly? There are still a lot of questions, but I hope the answers will appear in the next chapters.
Anonymous
11/21/25, 2:00 AM
Great work as always!
11/17/25, 6:44 AM
Wonderful stuff. I've never read such a developed, specific reprogramming of the POV, plus orcs! It's also nice and long, original, edited well... Thanks and know that this is my new favorite by far :) Just curious, how did you develop this story? You just sat down and wrote it, or you knew some aspects that you wanted to include and just made them work together? I write bits but I can never flesh out ideas to this degree.

11/20/25, 8:56 PM
@[speaktothemanagerwithin](/user/show/10066984) I’m very glad you enjoyed the story! Having the development complicated specifically feels nice, because I’ve been working hard on making things flow nicely. As for how I’d develop it, I’d say the latter thing you said is accurate. I have some ideas that I know I’m going to include and I find the most natural progression for them throughout the story.
11/20/25, 8:37 PM
Incredible. Thank you Sir. 😊
11/20/25, 1:22 PM
Tomorrow will tell a tale

11/20/25, 2:20 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Surely everything will be alright in the morning after a good night’s sleep…
11/20/25, 12:40 PM
Just wanted to say this is very fun, and I love the worldbuilding you set up here, plus the gender fuckery.
11/20/25, 5:55 AM
Can't wait for more

11/20/25, 11:19 AM
@[Jonanator](/user/show/863971) More is coming :wink:
Willie Cici
11/20/25, 2:58 AM
This was incredible. Well written and hot and sexy. A good slow boil story. Keep writing. You have a knack for it.

11/20/25, 11:18 AM
@Willie Cici Hot Dam! Pretty awesome to hear that kinda feedback from someone whose stories are some of my go-to favourites. Thanks very much.