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2/12/22, 11:06 AM
Very well written story
2/12/22, 10:44 AM
What an excellent story
Kent
2/12/22, 9:54 AM
can't wait for more
2/12/22, 8:26 AM
one of the hottest series ever! wish there ore chapters to come

2/12/22, 8:35 AM
@sanfrandave thanks man, maybe the client will ask for more or someone else will commission new chapters...
2/12/22, 4:00 AM
I had a lot of fun with this one!
fry
2/11/22, 8:42 PM
Well...there's always next months rent/mortgage payment to make isn't there? More cam shows, special events to take part in?
2/11/22, 7:23 PM
Fascinating. Can't wait for the next part.
2/11/22, 6:47 PM
Great setup! Interested to see where this goes
Kyle Cicero
2/11/22, 12:12 PM
I agree with controlme. Every story on this website, and many others, have the basics same theme. Yet, a talented writer, can make it enjoyable and erotic. Jack is such a writer. I would also agree with Jack that, if you don't like his stories, the solution is obvious. Simply go to somebody else. I look forward to the final chapter of the story and hopefully they'll be a continuation of the prior story involving the born again jock. look, from personal experience, I can tell you that it isn't easy to write highly erotic stories. You have to go over them again and again to get it right. Trust me, it takes time and effort. So I appreciate Jack and his writing. I am dazzled by his ability to pound them out, no pun intended, so we readers can do the same. Please don't take this as a slap anybody else but just something I felt had to be said.
2/11/22, 1:33 AM
Turned into a total bottom by a top. Familiar story

2/11/22, 1:35 AM
@mjkuhl I write what my clients ask for :)

2/11/22, 9:53 AM
@mjkuhl, it should be familiar. It's the overwhelming theme of this entire website. And Jack Parker is really good at it. I came at least once from each of the chapters in this story. I read his stuff to get turned on, jerk off, and release. He doesn't disappoint. Just the right balance of story and sex to make it both interesting and hot. @Jack Parker, thank you for another awesome story. I sense that it has finished, but I'll just point out that there is plenty of room for more development. Dallas is still fully clothed and not wearing a collar, hasn't been double-teamed, hasn't been caged, etc...

2/11/22, 10:02 AM
@ControlMe the next chapter is the last one that was commissioned but maybe someone might order more