Nash seems to be implying that Greyson is a well known dom/top. Makes me wonder if he dominated any of Dallas' friends or teammates prior. great chapter as always!

Love your writing and this story as much as the first time it was posted. Can't wait for something new!

Thanks Man, Great Chapter!

With your writing I got to wonder how many pairs of balls you have subjugated, waiting on the next syllable from you, checking back multiple times a day to see it you've posted. Guessing it's more than a few. Your story telling is the equivalent of having the biggest cock in the room...

Seriously hot chapter!! All I can say is please write more!!

Worth staying up for. Literally!

You cannot possibly write these chapters fast enough!

I really hope you write a sequel because this is honestly amazing!

This story is well-written, sexy, and intriguing. It stands well on its own, but if part 2 is in the works, I'm all for it.

I need to thank the readers that have commented. And because of this, I have decided to post the concluding chapter for Heat. It'll probably take me a few days. I wrote out a draft this afternoon, but it's not quite right. I feel that I didn't quite stick the landing, so a few changes are required to fully conclude this story. I really want it to end in the best way possible. So I've forwarded a draft on to a trusted writer that I greatly admire. I hope you don't mind, but I also want to take a moment to talk about comments. I'm not really trying to solicit comments. But I just want readers to be aware of how much time and effort that every writer puts into their stories. I have literally thought about this particular story "Heat" for weeks. And I wrote a draft of Chapter 1 weeks ago. And since that time, I have probably spent several hours editing and refining it, really making an effort to give you guys a product worth your time to read. And in most cases, my rule of thumb is: if I've gotten you hard by tapping into your innermost fantasies, that's all the thanks that I need. However, for stories that aren't commented on, it can be a bit discouraging for that writer. Having spent all that time and effort, and also sharing their sexual fantasies, the writer is hoping that there is a reader that also gets turned on and affected by that story. For instance, there is a writer (one that I greatly admire) who also wrote something today. And as of now, nobody has commented on his latest addition. It's a bit discouraging because this guy has provided amazing ... and I mean AMAZING fantasies to this site. I have read, re-read over and over, jacking off, getting off numerously to what he has written. Absman420 is a literary giant on this site, and I feel honored if I'm ever considered in the same league as him. So I guess I'm saying that I'm thankful that after reading a chapter, you guys are taking a moment to reciprocate and provide some kind of way for the writer to know they've affected you. I'm sorry if any of you felt that I'm preaching on some soap box, but it really could mean a lot for a writer to know that you guys are out there. And we aren't going to know that unless you comment.