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2/7/22, 7:13 PM
Unlike my last story, this one 'can' have a continuing chapter. I'm curious whether readers want it. I guess I've been writing for so long, I'm wondering whether guys still enjoy my stories. I'll be honest. I'm about 3 pages into the second (and concluding) chapter. There will be no Chapter 3. But is that something you guys want? I mean, this first chapter (in my mind) is certainly good enough. What if I screw it all up? What if you don't like what the Stranger has in mind with Chase? Should we just stop now? Or do you want a Chapter 2? Your call.

2/8/22, 1:28 AM
@rubbrsome how could we not want a second part. if in doubt at least know that I used to check your profile for stories religiously. you are by far my most favorite writer. I was sad a while back cause I thought you has stopped writing. I just noticed that I missed the story before this one 😀

Gasuda
2/11/22, 6:37 AM
@rubbrsome Don't be afraid to post a second version if people don't like it. It's also your story, though, and we're just along for the ride. Write it for you.
2/11/22, 5:07 AM
You are welcome and you are right. There are options out others can turn too. But when you come to a site about guys getting taken down a peg or two or more are we deciding to enter a world of the familiar where great writers can give the familiar an interesting take, like you do. Anyways, I'm going on too long on the topic. I'll write regarding a commission. Thank you for writing.
2/11/22, 4:43 AM
LOL, you "write" what your clients ask for? I'd say you kill it, destroy it, own rhem with every word. And they come back and we your readers come back because you make the familiar interesting. Think it's time to put my money were my mouth is and become a client. No doubt the story will be a familiar theme no doubt you will make it interesting as fuck and no doubt your words will fuck our minds like a virtual pile driver plowing into our inner selves. Familiar in theme sure but unique to you. No offense intended to the guy that called it familiar but every dude that takes the time to write deserves our thanks not just our comments. i's write you about my own "familiar" idea. I'll pay. You'll write. I will love it. the silent readers too afraid to comment will love it as well I'll pay more. You will write more. Yeah it'll be familiar like a story of lost or found love by author can be but it'll be your great take on it. I'll pay more, they will wait on your stories. and so on. All of us dependant on the guy with the bigger talent and greater discipline to put on paper what we can not: the guy with the bigger virtual cock in the firm of talent till we get used to waiting on every story. Ain't like ownership? Tons of readers here, a few critics too. Not enough authors. Thank you! I'll tune into your familiar story any day BOSS.

2/11/22, 4:55 AM
@Currious thank you for saying that, I'm aware i have a theme but all of the stories i post here are commisions by people who are asking for more of that theme. I'm sorry if that seems repetitious to some but it's what I'm paid to write. If it seems familiar or boring to others i'd suggest reading some of the other fine stories on the site.
Anonymous
2/11/22, 3:56 AM
This is super good! Definitely one of my favorites I'm very curious if there's going to be a chapter 3
Anonymous
2/11/22, 2:06 AM
hot, sad he didn't make it but hot none the less.
Jack
2/11/22, 12:25 AM
Please tell me you guys are going to do more with this series! It's fantastic and I really want to see if this relationship progresses.
Evan
2/11/22, 12:06 AM
Absolute masterpiece. I love this. I thought he was going to manage to mount. Dangling that hope for both the character and the reader. Awesome reversal and really felt his struggle to stay in control. And eventually lose. So, so, so happy you continued this. Brilliant! 11 out of 10. It's got those familiar elements we love but with a new, clever spin. Hot, original, and well-written. What's not to like. And blown away excited that another chapter is coming.
2/10/22, 10:26 PM
You know, Nash still has an unfucked ass...
2/10/22, 5:46 AM
Great job! Chase's struggle for dominance is so well-written, and I love how you wrapped things up here.

2/10/22, 9:36 PM
@Hypnothrill ... oh Hypnothrill. You know this isn't the end. Just when I was wrapping up the story, this little devil appeared on my shoulder. Instead of a pitchfork, he prodded me with his "dickfork". (That's a rod with a three pronged cock at the end). Anyways, this little devil coaxed me into writing one last chapter. Now I got to write what this little devil put into my head. While it's work for me, it'll probably bring some enjoyment to the readers. So it's all worth it.
2/10/22, 8:55 PM
You got me leaking at work. Thanks for the story. Do you foresee a back story on how the alpha was transformed?

2/10/22, 9:32 PM
@TexMuscle ... Nope. I think sometimes some questions are best left unanswered. In this case, I don't think an origin story could satisfy. I would rather let readers imagine where this guy came from. I honestly have no idea what his story is. I just know he's searching for his equal. While he didn't find it in the sauna, he did acquire two pups that will bring him enjoyment and companionship.