Recent Comments

2/23/22, 3:56 PM
I like the addition of the phantom bracelet. sounds like a fun idea
2/23/22, 2:56 PM
Absolutely fantastic, definitely my fav so far! love when the concept and the writing are both so well executed!! ❤️
2/23/22, 1:11 PM
wow!
Martin
2/22/22, 8:28 PM
Wonderful! So is this the story you want to continue outside of the challenge? Please, I BEG you to do so!

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2/22/22, 8:50 PM
@Martin It sure is! I’m looking forward to writing more of it 😁

2/23/22, 3:31 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Yes, please continue it. That was so hot!
2/22/22, 8:07 PM
loved
2/21/22, 6:53 PM
loved it. can't wait for more.
2/21/22, 6:51 PM
This is cute hope that they become friends.
2/21/22, 6:48 PM
Great addition to the story! The 'pissing on the field' scene is brilliant. I can't wait to see more ❤️