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2/12/22, 4:00 AM
I had a lot of fun with this one!
fry
2/11/22, 8:42 PM
Well...there's always next months rent/mortgage payment to make isn't there? More cam shows, special events to take part in?
2/11/22, 7:23 PM
Fascinating. Can't wait for the next part.
2/11/22, 6:47 PM
Great setup! Interested to see where this goes
Kyle Cicero
2/11/22, 12:12 PM
I agree with controlme. Every story on this website, and many others, have the basics same theme. Yet, a talented writer, can make it enjoyable and erotic. Jack is such a writer. I would also agree with Jack that, if you don't like his stories, the solution is obvious. Simply go to somebody else. I look forward to the final chapter of the story and hopefully they'll be a continuation of the prior story involving the born again jock. look, from personal experience, I can tell you that it isn't easy to write highly erotic stories. You have to go over them again and again to get it right. Trust me, it takes time and effort. So I appreciate Jack and his writing. I am dazzled by his ability to pound them out, no pun intended, so we readers can do the same. Please don't take this as a slap anybody else but just something I felt had to be said.
2/11/22, 1:33 AM
Turned into a total bottom by a top. Familiar story

2/11/22, 1:35 AM
@mjkuhl I write what my clients ask for :)

2/11/22, 9:53 AM
@mjkuhl, it should be familiar. It's the overwhelming theme of this entire website. And Jack Parker is really good at it. I came at least once from each of the chapters in this story. I read his stuff to get turned on, jerk off, and release. He doesn't disappoint. Just the right balance of story and sex to make it both interesting and hot. @Jack Parker, thank you for another awesome story. I sense that it has finished, but I'll just point out that there is plenty of room for more development. Dallas is still fully clothed and not wearing a collar, hasn't been double-teamed, hasn't been caged, etc...

2/11/22, 10:02 AM
@ControlMe the next chapter is the last one that was commissioned but maybe someone might order more
2/11/22, 9:55 AM
The story is very good, better than the first chase, he has his well-deserved fuck, it is well known that chase is a puppy, now I wonder why so many doubts??? He is destined to be the most used puppy, super humiliated and enslaved of all, I would not have liked that he was also the alpha, I would not have enjoyed this story. I really like what he became chase, thank you very much for writing this beautiful story
2/11/22, 7:40 AM
Hope we get the next part to this story soon! Want to hear how the boy escaped and if the officer is able to help him. After such an experience I wonder if the boy will find himself forever changed in unexpected ways too
2/7/22, 7:13 PM
Unlike my last story, this one 'can' have a continuing chapter. I'm curious whether readers want it. I guess I've been writing for so long, I'm wondering whether guys still enjoy my stories. I'll be honest. I'm about 3 pages into the second (and concluding) chapter. There will be no Chapter 3. But is that something you guys want? I mean, this first chapter (in my mind) is certainly good enough. What if I screw it all up? What if you don't like what the Stranger has in mind with Chase? Should we just stop now? Or do you want a Chapter 2? Your call.

2/8/22, 1:28 AM
@rubbrsome how could we not want a second part. if in doubt at least know that I used to check your profile for stories religiously. you are by far my most favorite writer. I was sad a while back cause I thought you has stopped writing. I just noticed that I missed the story before this one 😀

Gasuda
2/11/22, 6:37 AM
@rubbrsome Don't be afraid to post a second version if people don't like it. It's also your story, though, and we're just along for the ride. Write it for you.
2/11/22, 5:07 AM
You are welcome and you are right. There are options out others can turn too. But when you come to a site about guys getting taken down a peg or two or more are we deciding to enter a world of the familiar where great writers can give the familiar an interesting take, like you do. Anyways, I'm going on too long on the topic. I'll write regarding a commission. Thank you for writing.