Recent Comments

3/5/22, 5:14 AM
I love this story, but you're right. It definitely feels incomplete. I would love to commission a third chapter but I'm not currently able to - moving expenses and everything - but...hmm food for thought

3/6/22, 4:54 AM
@Some Guy it isn't going anywhere :)
3/6/22, 4:40 AM
The coach is doing a great job making Scott into a slave. I hope he gets more time in that latex suit as the coach increases his control over him.
3/6/22, 1:51 AM
Once again, delving into DC guys like no one else, and with Tim and Conner, two of my favorites. Black shirt Conner is such a fantasy, and you do wonders with him. “Badly sir,” has gotta be the best line and moment of this whole chapter, so fucking hot and expertly written and escalated from there.
Hypnominion
3/5/22, 10:53 PM
Fairly well-composed. I Like the final imagery.
3/5/22, 9:49 PM
Very Hot story, Kept me boned reading it.. keep up the good work!!!
3/5/22, 4:42 PM
Continuing to enjoy this story. The world-building is superb, and the characters are well developed. I liked getting to meet Marin in this chapter and would love to know more of the history between Marin and Rhys. Keep up the excellent writing!

Cuddle-switch
3/5/22, 6:01 PM
@Hypnoguy67 I'm really glad you're enjoying it! As a new author, it's very encouraging to see people's comments like this.

Anonymous
3/5/22, 6:05 PM
@Hypnoguy67 We already have a pretty clear idea of what Marin and Rhys's history is, and I am wondering how and if we could drop some hints about it in the future. I would personally love to get Marin and Jasper in the same room so Marin could tell stories about Rhys.

Cuddle-switch
3/5/22, 6:10 PM
@Hypnoguy67 The above message: "We already have a pretty clear idea of what Marin and Rhys’s history is, and I am wondering how and if we could drop some hints about it in the future. I would personally love to get Marin and Jasper in the same room so Marin could tell stories about Rhys." was from me, @Cuddle-switch, but it showed as if it was from anonymous for some reason.

3/5/22, 6:10 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're into the worldbuilding and characters. For me, a big goal for this chapter was developing more of who these people are, and especially trying to figure out what Marin is like after everything, ten years on.
3/5/22, 6:24 AM
would like to see some fisting and fetish action
3/5/22, 12:04 AM
Damn, I love this story.

3/5/22, 3:17 AM
@Beaner We love to hear it! Thanks for letting us know!

Cuddle-switch
3/5/22, 3:35 AM
@Beaner I'm really glad you're enjoying it -- we look forward to writing more and we really enjoy hearing people's thoughts on this!
3/2/22, 2:38 AM
martin, i agree with the comment complaining. This was a giant tease. very disappointing. And whether it's free or not, it gets critcism -- that's why someone publishes. Unlike you, O've been commenting as the story went along. O agree with anonmous and think he or she had valid comments. Don't be a cock tease when you are writing erotica.

Martin
3/2/22, 6:25 AM
@JuniorNeedsaButtSpanking I can't see any comments of yours under any of Henry's stories on this site. Unless you wrote them anonymously or with another account. Criticism is fine, of course, there's no point in having a comment section if we would have issues with negative criticism. But it's a matter of the general tone and angle of criticism. If it's written in a way to offend the author and to discourage him from writing again, it's not helpful at all. And I see Anon's criticism in that way, no matter how valid their issues may be. BTW, you can see that there are people enjoying the series a lot. Don't assume just because YOU felt unsatisfied with it, that it's not ok to publish a story the way that Henry did.

3/4/22, 1:19 AM
YOU WANT TO SPANK ME MARTIN? PUT ME IK N MY PLACE? @Martin

Martin
3/4/22, 6:20 AM
@JuniorNeedsaButtSpanking 😈
3/4/22, 5:19 AM
Oh boy I'm really liking how this story is turning into. I'm also glade that JD is helping his old friends out with their body's as well.