Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/6/22, 3:44 PM
great concept!! would love to see more
3/5/22, 5:07 AM
will have very graphic dreams tonight

3/6/22, 12:20 PM
@Peter LOL.... glad to hear it. 😁
3/6/22, 11:20 AM
I hope spandex/lycra will take be a part of the new trainer's outfits. Leather is hot but SPandex just hits differently.
3/6/22, 2:16 AM
Would love to see this go on, but it also exists at a perfect moment that does a lot of justice to their stories, dynamic and friendship. Bravo!

3/6/22, 4:54 AM
@Essex thanks man!
3/5/22, 5:14 AM
I love this story, but you're right. It definitely feels incomplete. I would love to commission a third chapter but I'm not currently able to - moving expenses and everything - but...hmm food for thought

3/6/22, 4:54 AM
@Some Guy it isn't going anywhere :)
3/6/22, 4:40 AM
The coach is doing a great job making Scott into a slave. I hope he gets more time in that latex suit as the coach increases his control over him.
3/6/22, 1:51 AM
Once again, delving into DC guys like no one else, and with Tim and Conner, two of my favorites. Black shirt Conner is such a fantasy, and you do wonders with him. “Badly sir,” has gotta be the best line and moment of this whole chapter, so fucking hot and expertly written and escalated from there.
Hypnominion
3/5/22, 10:53 PM
Fairly well-composed. I Like the final imagery.
3/5/22, 9:49 PM
Very Hot story, Kept me boned reading it.. keep up the good work!!!
3/5/22, 4:42 PM
Continuing to enjoy this story. The world-building is superb, and the characters are well developed. I liked getting to meet Marin in this chapter and would love to know more of the history between Marin and Rhys. Keep up the excellent writing!

Cuddle-switch
3/5/22, 6:01 PM
@Hypnoguy67 I'm really glad you're enjoying it! As a new author, it's very encouraging to see people's comments like this.

Anonymous
3/5/22, 6:05 PM
@Hypnoguy67 We already have a pretty clear idea of what Marin and Rhys's history is, and I am wondering how and if we could drop some hints about it in the future. I would personally love to get Marin and Jasper in the same room so Marin could tell stories about Rhys.

Cuddle-switch
3/5/22, 6:10 PM
@Hypnoguy67 The above message: "We already have a pretty clear idea of what Marin and Rhys’s history is, and I am wondering how and if we could drop some hints about it in the future. I would personally love to get Marin and Jasper in the same room so Marin could tell stories about Rhys." was from me, @Cuddle-switch, but it showed as if it was from anonymous for some reason.

3/5/22, 6:10 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're into the worldbuilding and characters. For me, a big goal for this chapter was developing more of who these people are, and especially trying to figure out what Marin is like after everything, ten years on.