Recent Comments

forced
5/16/25, 7:21 AM
I really want to give this story a chance but the writing. ... its painfully distracting. It feels more like a rough draft that a high schooler sent in over text message. Does it get better after this?

5/16/25, 2:22 PM
@forced Hi forced! I must apologize 4 the overuse of CAPS....I was just getting started and I used caps for emphasis (or force by the villian(s))-- I will let you know that others shared your feelings, and I did my best to improve on this....it does reduce (after a couple of chapters)-- I hope you continue with the story! Thanks 4 the support/interest!
5/16/25, 10:09 AM
One of the best series this year by far! Keep it up. So stoked for more chapters.
5/16/25, 10:23 AM
L9oking forward to reading more.
5/16/25, 11:54 AM
Definitely! Cannot wait for the next chapter, really hope it's continues down that kinky piggy path that your last story did with fisting and watersports and all kinds of other fun stuff. Either way I am anxiously waiting the next chapter just like everybody else here. You sir are quite the amazing writer.
5/16/25, 12:58 PM
THIS IS A GREAT STORY!... Thank YOU.
Anonymous
5/16/25, 1:58 PM
This story is the perfect slow-burner!!!! Im addicted!!!!

lukas pucci
5/16/25, 4:04 PM
@Anonymous glad u like it
Anonymous
5/16/25, 3:28 PM
Like how it took longer to convince Liam to taste his own pre than Noah's. The further they get the more resistant Liam seems. Maybe Noah shouldn't let him cum so fast to motivate him more.

lukas pucci
5/16/25, 4:04 PM
@Anonymous yea, and noted, liam eventually is gonna be beggining to cum, you'll see!
Anonymous
5/16/25, 3:40 PM
Great story so far.. a slow burn that actually goes somewhere. Great balance of angst and payoff. Great pacing. Do your thing bro

lukas pucci
5/16/25, 4:04 PM
@Anonymous dudee thanks so much for that, will do
5/16/25, 3:50 PM
So hotttttt
5/16/25, 4:16 PM
I love it.

lukas pucci
5/16/25, 5:49 PM
@Jonanator 🥵