Recent Comments

DD
3/12/22, 1:21 PM
Woof, this was a really good read. I hope you are going to explore these characters more, I'd love to see the tables turn on William, if that's in the cards.

3/14/22, 12:43 AM
@DD Thanks! After you said this quite a few other people have made a similar comment. I might have some ideas to continue it...
3/13/22, 10:56 PM
Wow, turnabout x2! And hot to boot πŸ˜πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

3/14/22, 12:41 AM
Thanks, @NeedControlling
Martin
3/13/22, 9:52 PM
I'm not really into puppy play, but this story is really great! I loved every second, I loved the twists, it's really a combination of a hot wank story and a witty intriguing read. Not sure if I understand that final twist in the last sentence though. Maybe too much of my blood is down there instead of in my brain...

3/14/22, 12:39 AM
@Martin well it's revealed that the end that Mitch, who William used to lure in Perry, is actually known to Jonas. Did they meet afterwards, or did Jonas know him before Perry went over to the house? ho is really out to control who?
3/14/22, 12:22 AM
Very fun and sexy. Personally I don't really like it when people or cocks get shrunk, or people get made fat. So I would have enjoyed the story more if Yusef had just turned into an elf (maybe a slutty twink elf) and was still dwarfed by his cousin being 7 ft tall. But that's just my personal preference. s far as example of computer rewriting reality it's pretty good
3/13/22, 9:43 PM
I'm actually happy with this ending, they were both able to get something from the dom/sub dynamic but they were able to realise that it wasn't good for them. A great story will defiantly be reading your other story and any stories that may come after that.

3/13/22, 10:53 PM
@Bunny0Boi Aww thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the ending. Great to have you on board, and hope you will enjoy reading my other stories too.
3/13/22, 2:10 PM
Oh my god this is so hot and *cute*β€”I’m really excited to follow this one! I can’t wait for more.

3/13/22, 5:57 PM
@Soren Fitz thanks bud!
Cracker
3/13/22, 1:36 PM
Once again another hot as fuck story.

3/13/22, 5:57 PM
@Cracker awww thanks
3/13/22, 7:28 AM
SO glad to see this story here!

3/13/22, 5:56 PM
@stimle thanks bud
DaTs
3/12/22, 1:41 AM
So hot!
3/11/22, 9:18 PM
Love this. Top pov and rimming. It's quite perfect.